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    fALL image (update)

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    First thing that's a tad disconcerting.. If he's upsidedown. Her hair has a personal vendetta against physics. And if she's not actually hanging upside down.. than turn the pic around. It does'nt help all too much. I

    do really like how the wings were left simple, though. They kind of create a border for the young lady, which is nice. But try for some more dynamic shading. bright brights and dark darks....

    I cant say much for anatomy, because I can't tell to well upside down. And I'm at work with no edition tools and I'm not going to to a handstand. ... but biggest thing though. WHYYYY did you substitute such a pretty dress for jeans?
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    whos the angel in boots?
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    Quote Originally Posted by noshadowmaster
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    She is quite the cutie, indeed.
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    OK changed the bg color hopefully looks better

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    Forget the background, work on the figure...

    If your using the photo for reference then draw what you see...
    ..then perhaps your character wont look so flat and stiff.
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