I see a lot of improvement throughout the book. Keep at it. Some nice figures. When drawing remember to cultural the peripheral elements like line quality to really and basically beautify your subjects.
Overall I'd say good update, although I do have one crit. When drawing technology and vehicles I think it's important to really try and give it a defianed and hard edge. Alot of your cars have a really sketchy lline which I feel kind of detracts from the subject.
So yeah I'd say just try and make sure when your drawing tech at least, go back and really define the form, give it a good sharp line so we can get a good crissp idea of the subject.
Some nice work, keep working. You have a few running distortions in your figures. I notice you extend or oversculpt the chest and groin especially. Genitals are not really part of the core of the figure, that may be the issue with your groin-work. groin-work.
Your last post is looking good, I like how you've crisped up some of the edges, it works to help define the vehicles form. I would say however that you should really think about defining the light source in your image. Right now I'm kind of confused where it's actually coming from, I think it's from behind the car, but then you have hard highlights on the opposite side.
Just something to think about and work with on your next go. All in all good work, I'm seeing progress, just keep pushing forward son!
hey man, well i have been seeing you work ur fargin ass off and its good to see man. I think you need to start kicking it up some more though man, i really do. On the first painitng (the ship) it looks a little out of perspective tilted really funny, i am not sure if its supposed to be a side view or show some of the top or botton, seems wonky, i like the photoshop tricks you were going for though. Your life drawing stuff is really coming along. Keep it up man