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    two new character designs

    Two new character designs; typical fantasy fare. Tried to balance clarity of form with detail, done pretty quickly...anyway, C+C welcome.

    Ye Olde Goblin with Poor Posture (extended arm length to make him extra gangly):
    two new character designs

    Swamp Elf:
    two new character designs

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    I dig the look of the second piece alot... i want to comment on the background but i have been working too many hours so my mind is drawing a blank. heh Pun not intended.

    Good elf though the tree is nice but could use a couple more levels of shading, if you are going for the cel look.

    the first piece... his left arm(our right) is a bit disjointed at the elbow you could bring it up and over a little or twist the hand to where you see the top of it more like you did with the other. Good one though.
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    I can make a comment on the bg. ^_^ you could give it more depth by adding more detail along the farther edges of the tree trunk. And giving the moss another shadow colour would help IMHO.

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    The goblin's left hand is a bit off, bent a little too much for where the forearm is. Other than that I like them.

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