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    Some new stuff... 6.21 +1new

    Last edited by farmer; June 21st, 2005 at 03:50 PM.
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    Some nice stuff on this page.

    Some of those paintings have a chaotic / confusing composition (like the first ones) though. Work on that.
    Your rendering style looks a bit undecided. Some concpets look very clean / digitally, some look heavy texturized.

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    Cool concepts. Your perspective is pretty good too. The first pic has major porportion issues, particularly with his arms. You're very good at environment rendering. Perhaps now you can go for different perspectives, instead of just the 3/4 Sim City view? Also, try to make your environment more complete. They still look sketchy.

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    Awesome works...this is my favorite...
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    Lovely colors and enviros!

    Ok, got a few things to say about this - about the characters - please don't use so many soft-edged brushes, there is no focus on the form that way and even if the design is cool it looks pretty much unfinished. Try with hard-edged brushes at least on the contours of the figures.

    The enviros are so pretty, but they look a bit flat as there is no focal point or the contrast is a bit too low.

    But it's nice, interesting and inspiring work

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    thank you guys for you replies..

    actually i am pretty far from being satisfied with my work..
    i know there are still alot issues...
    i will work on the points you mentioned... thx

    @ParkerD: dude his arm is enchanged does it really look like its done by mistake? cheers

    here one more... done last night.. i had a vision about this picture in my bed while i almost felt in sleep... then i woke up an made this.. this happens quite often but i never was able to realize those pics before.. im glad to notice some improvement... i hope you do so

    tell me you what you thik about...

    Cheers

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    i worked on it abit... perhaps its a bit more interesting now

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    the perspective of the rug isnt the same as the flooring in the last picture

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