This started out as a quick sketch of some book characters, and I ended up finishing it off. It has some major problems that I was hoping some of you might point out - I've stared at it too long. Here's the lineart:
finished colors in Photoshop (inspired by a recent Fables cover by James Jean :
and with a texture overly to get rid of the digital look:
The main thing that's buggin me is how in the colored version both characters look top-heavy. I know their heads are too big in the lineart, but the problem seems amplified with the colors. Will probably go back and fix up the rendering on the girl. Also, I just realized I hate the border and little design thingys. Any other thoughts?