There's always one who has to lead the way to new discoveries.
There is a day when all departs
I´m coming out of age,
all your chains and all your wards
someday will be unmade.
Be prepared of me these days
as all of you shall be
when all my false and rodent faiths
break ´way just as do we.
It's a very nice concept but I think you're over doing it for this scene.
I feel there is to much darkening across the grass and not enough where the water meets the grass, or maybe a third colour of brown around the edge. The sky could also be one colour rather than showing the wind effect.
Just a suggestion on making it more simple and clear.
Love the sheep though very nicely done and the perspective on the mountains is great.