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May 8th, 2005 #1
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Last pic isn't understandable emediatly. I suggest to scratch more beafore do the final.
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that place needs a hitchin post up front no doubt.
May 9th, 2005 #4
May 9th, 2005 #5
like the style and coloring but I see some problems in composition of the scenes, precisely, the last one. Doing two frames of a character aproaching the bar seems boring, I would do the last frame like a shot from inside the bar, the bar patrons are looking the main guy entering...otherwise great work...
one more thing don't like the rainbow colors, looks too childis for my taste..'...men must be free from
boundaries, patterns and
consistencies in order to be free
to think, feel and create in new ways'
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