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    Comic I'm working on

    Hi all!!

    Here is a link to the webpage of the Fiction Clemens comic i'm doing

    Fiction Clemens comic

    and a preview image

    page 3
    Comic I'm working on

    hope you like it, critics an comments please...

    Adeu!!

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    Last pic isn't understandable emediatly. I suggest to scratch more beafore do the final.

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    that place needs a hitchin post up front no doubt.

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    Thanks for comets guys!

    Helps me to see what i must to take kare about the next time.
    About the pages, those are the final version aproved by the people i'm woking, so i'll not make any changes.

    thaks again!

    bye

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    like the style and coloring but I see some problems in composition of the scenes, precisely, the last one. Doing two frames of a character aproaching the bar seems boring, I would do the last frame like a shot from inside the bar, the bar patrons are looking the main guy entering...otherwise great work...


    one more thing don't like the rainbow colors, looks too childis for my taste..

    '...men must be free from
    boundaries, patterns and
    consistencies in order to be free
    to think, feel and create in new ways'
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