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    For over a thousand generations the Jedi Knights...

    ...were the guardians of peace and justice in the Old Republic, before the dark times, before the Empire. A young Jedi named Darth Vader, who was a pupil of mine until he turned to evil, helped the Empire hunt down and destroy the Jedi Knights. Vader was seduced by the Dark Side of the Force...



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    I like this image but it is a bit to blurred on some areas. Try to sharpen some edges with a hard edged brush (or be lazy and use a filter).

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    His hand needs fixing, dearly.

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    Yeah, good pic, but too fuzzy. His right forearm seems too short and there are some issues with the way the hand is holding the lightsaber.

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    it strikes me as illogical that an decapitated body would prop itself up like that.

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    It took a thousand generations but they finally invented truly wrinkle free pants. I think the whole thing looks a little plain and lifeless... a little too soft in a lot of places and the la-dee-da pose and look on his face... theres just no emotion or feeling anywhere here, even the corpses are rather ho-hum. Colors are good though.

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    I think the clouds are cool, the seem as if theyre moving.
    + what everyone said above me.

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    I have a pair of those wrinkle-free pants! I got them from...oh yeah..I can't tell you. It's a secret.

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    Thank you all for taking the time to crit me! I tried some new things with this piece and most of them were not successfully executed. I will try to rework the composition and lighting in a new piece. Again, thank you for taking the time to let me know!



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