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    Fantasy castle sketch - WIP, please tell me what you think

    Here's something just out of my head, it was a pencil sketch and I liked it so I did a little rough inking and want to take it to painter for color.
    Please give me a few comments what you like about it and what not. I'll post updates as soon as I get the coloring done. Thanks

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    That's a nice sketch. There are a few spots that have some perspective issues. The arch is off, the left end is too low. The towers on the right side seem to be leaning toward the right side. The castle wall is also off.

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    Yeah, the arch was bothering me, too... it looks a bit like a twisted noodle I just couldn't figure out what exactly the problem was, thanks alot look

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    Update: Fixed some perspective problems (I hope) and a first little bit of coloring, I've never used Painters watercolors before so I decided to give it a go..not done by any means yet but if you have helpful comments on anything, I'll gladly embrace them Don't take the clouds serious, I was just throwing in some color generally

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    I think u shoud use ink, and to do lines with more atention. Drawing is good, but rendering missing.

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    Thanks Danilo I think I'm gonna go to my top layer (the linework stuff) ,rework it and then see how it turns out.

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