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I'm not as happy with this one as the previous 2 I've done, but it'll suffice.
Hope you all like it!
I have so much to learn from you. thanks for the comments on my first 2 colorings... appreciate it alot. hope to see some more lineart from ya! it's da best! =)
all the best
Joakim Norberg, Sweden
i think this is really nice.
given the angle of the light,
i would like to see a little more cast shadow on his forehead form his hair.
- Dan Dos Santos
Good job with his hair and all the cloth. You must have studied how cloth folds. That's something I need to work on.
Thanks for sharing.
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Jucky: Thanks mate. Keep at it and your colouring will improve loads. I've only been colouring for just over a year now. You'll be sure to see some more lineart soon. Thanks again!
DSillustration: Cheers buddy. Good spot on the shading, damn you!
Halis_Aetrous: Folds in clothes are something that I've been trying to improve on as I'd avoided them so much when I was younger. I'm still not great at them, but I'm getting there. Thanks for the comment.
Looks good, Dave. Well, except for the text on his shirt - unless it's your intention for it to look very rigid, you should shape it more to the hang of the material. I like the off-center composition and the colours are, of course, very pleasing.
Thanks Matt. Yeah I should've moved the writing on the top slightly. I got a bit fed up with the image to be honest, and just thought 'hell with it, it's done'. I'm hoping everybody has a say like that every so often!
I see a problem with the left arm, seems flat, you should improve the perspective a little bit... Maybe the arm shadow cast on the body would help.
I would clean it up a bit - looks messy - some values inconsisten, face needs some line cleaning, etc.
Also try working B&W - you can add color later after nailing your values.
Colors are also a bit too saturated and some variation in temperature would make it pop up better.
Looking forward the update
I registered for one purpose only, I saw your work and simply had to say WOW! This is pritty damn good. Very nice light and shade, GREAT colouring, nice line work, pritty good folds in the cloth and a very nice pose. I simply don't understand why your not so happy with your own piece it's GREAT! GOOD JOB MAN!
Thanks for the crits guys. (Oblio: Update? Pah! )
~Reborn~ : You actually registered just to tell me you like my work? Wow. Seriously. That's probably the nicest compliment I've had in a long time! Thanks buddy, that's really great of you.