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May 1st, 2005 #1
stuff [UPDATE -05-03-05]
i did a few..
2 commisions.. well not really no money involved.. obviously hehe
and uh something i did as a gift for someone.. quickly in an hour or so
C&C very welcome!
hope u enjoyed watching these
Last edited by Joey-b; May 3rd, 2005 at 11:10 AM.
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I like the first one, only the arm really bothers me.
After a while it would most certainly fall off, or crumble.. it would be much cooler if the arm was (for example) resting on his knee or something...
May 2nd, 2005 #3
yeah.. i know.. looks a bit lame.. hmm ill c if i can adjust it a bit.. thx for suggesting!
May 2nd, 2005 #4
Hey Joey, these are pretty good. I know you post about as much as Davi, but I havent seen one for a while. These are much improved over some of your older posts. Keep it up!
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May 2nd, 2005 #5
I really like the hot and cool contrast in the second piece. The first piece seems rushed, but is an interesting idea. I also like the cool colors of the third piece.
Kevin Steele (Nurokatt)
May 3rd, 2005 #6
scuba - thx allot nice to hear
nurokatt - yeah the piece was a bit rushed.. specially the bg
May 3rd, 2005 #7
doodle.. worked out..
was just exercising my drawing.. kinda liked this.. so detailed it out a bit
C&C very welcome once mroe.. cause i know there's allot wrong with it just cant put my finger on it
May 3rd, 2005 #8
Ah I see the problem; Her shirt's too long!
Oh and the eyes aren't the same size, but I like it.
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May 4th, 2005 #9
You're getting better and better.
As a generall comment i'll say that your colors are still too saturated - you should have more variation in saturation, focus, temperature and so on.
et i thing the main problem is still on a basic level of form and values.
Try to convert the last peice to balck and white - you'll see some issues to the neck and some too strong contrasts to the ... top area
Keep em comming!
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Nice use of colour to show form, the girl at the bottom is the best methinks.
"The only true knowledge is in knowing, that you know nothing".
-Socrates (Bill & Ted's Excellent Adventure).
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May 4th, 2005 #11
Gilead - my dad said the same hehe
Oblio - yes i know i should do black n white more.. but i like colors so much.. what is a good way to put colors in later?? i tried it ones using color balance and changing hue... but then the colors get so flat..
hmm maybe just set my drawing to multiply and put colors under m??
hope u get to read this
Lazy gun - thx allot!
wow im finally gettin some good words.. motivates me allot.. thx all of u