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    Just a rather hurridely finished piece. Rather intimidating against the others I've encountered here. But...yeah. I stumbled upon this site several days ago. I thought it was nice...Yah for me.




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    Hey, there... Well, first off. I would def. say for you to move this to the WIP/ sketch thread being that it is unfinished... After that I would say that its a pretty interesting drawing you have here but, its a bit confusing to truely understand whats going on in the pic. I get whats in the forground with the two characters but, what are those thnigs near the character thats entering the room? are they pillars or just wall borders??

    Mainloop- man i must be dyslexic.. cuz i thought you asked how many people are on lsd

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    keep working at it. try inking it. contrast will help a lot. try looking at some design books. sometimes the simplest design is the best.

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    nice drawing, and good anatomy.

    There is a mysterious lack of hands and faces though.

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    I'm with Vigo. Additionally, the composition is forcing the eye into the lower left hand corner and holding it there, forcing it to eat stale poptarts and giving it noogies. The aforementioned lack of hands and faces (which display most of the emotion, by the way, making this piece rather emotionless) and anatomical irregularities prompt me to recommend more figure work and anatomy study.

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