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really good drawings, man!
Definitely a huge improvement I think, keep pushing it!
Don't forget to work the blues from the sky into the background too for some depth! Can't wait to see where you go with this one!
Hey! cool stuff, lotta energy. You definately use a bold-ass palette, but you work each color into the whole composition so it still ties together nicely. Well played!
That compo is looking pretty good now. The only think I can nitpick is that the figures in the corners draw a little too much attention. Maybe move them towards the center, or make the less saturated with less contrast and make the center figure that strong red instead. Just nitpicks though, so grain of salt
haha OH EM GEE it's totally starcraft now! marines, firebats, and a battlecruiser!!!!
damn i gotta get out more.
Bust out the new portfolio man, i cant wait to see it.
WALA! comic portfolio 2006!
Still needs some minor tweaks here and there, mainly the radiator needs to be added to the bike on page 2 last panel, and completely finished on page 4 last panel.
So what does everyone think?
Arne S., Andy P: Thanks!
SirGreenSock: Yeah, progress has been put on hold while i finish up my comic portfolio for the convention this weekend, expect to see an update sometime in the near future though
Meatsworthy: Thanks for the critiques man, Ill consider your words, Im going to add some figures in the right on the buildings, hence why the dudes are pointing.
Kina: Hey, you gave me an idea, im going to turn it into a starcraft themed piece, and enter it into blizzards contest! LOL everybody is doing WoW it seems, I think ill do starcrack.
Taj: Here ya go mate!
hey ape awesome lines going on. Love that comic, no wonder you got in animation dude, solid work.
Some updates, and a new one. Colours are super muddy on the axe dude, Ill probably fix them up later as well as the hands.
Endregan: Thanks man
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hey did you put it into the blizzard contest? didja didja?
Still great stuff AAA. I love your comic inked work!
the still lifes are really nice.
keep em coming
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