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[4rt-r41d]

Hi.

Im going to take my lazy ass of the bed and try to study things.
i need to improve my drawing so i will update this thread every week.

will start with quick studies.
c & c are welcome.

some hand studies. very quick.



more hands.



arm study



anatomi study



anatomi study 2



something



face study



cloth



thanks cya

[razuel]

Looking good. There's a lot of white space on your pages, fill them up.. draw bigger or draw more-- make use of the whole paper. Also, with your cloth studies, draw more of the cloth instead of a little piece, for example.. draw an entire shirt. The setup matters too, even draw the background, it's all part of the practice.

[4rt-r41d]

razuel : thanks for the crit and the comments. yeah i will remember that til next update, just started out with the studies.

and here comes todays update:

a quick hand, i did play with contrast.



and here are some diffrent studies, quick ones



tried a face and some eyes.



a girl, aint happy with this one.



more cloth.



anatomi study. turned out quite good



more anatomy



thats all for this time, will update wednesday or thursday,

hope ya like it.

c & c most welcome

cya

[4rt-r41d]

ok its been a unproductive week. been busy with other stuff.

but here are the few pics ive made







thats all for today.

will be back next week.

cya

[4rt-r41d]

ok, here comes some new stuff.
some scetches, and such,

here ya go:












thats all for now.

more to come

[P E N Ricklund]

Great muscle and anatomy studie, keep em' flowing in

[4rt-r41d]

Hello. im back with a very poor utdate.
but anyhow here they are..











thats it for now, c & c are most welcome.

got to draw more.

cya

[Tigermilk]

Very good muscle studies. The latest hands were good too, ´tho I think u should mark the bone structure more to get a better feel of tha hand, and besides, it's good practise. Try study the feet also. U got a book about the human anatomy, btw? If not; get one, read and make your own nots and studies, etc..

Doing great, keep it up!

[P E N Ricklund]

Tigermilk made a good point here.
Test drawing the skeleton and then doing the same skeleton with muscles on it.

And the bicep looks to pointy, but I don't know, maybe they look like that

[4rt-r41d]

Tigermilk: thank you, i will study feet till next time. your crit is very helpful.

Pencilator: ok the bicep was odd anyway thank you

and here are some new ones. c & c are wellcome

a portrait of my girlfirend. speedpaint



a portrait of a fella in school



crappy hands



bones





thats all for this time, cya

[hurricane]

hi there!

my critique would be:

1. keep doing anatomy studies

2. dont draw yourself tired of doing studies, mix em into imaginery pieces...like, draw an orc but you do a muscle study while you do it, in that way you're practising imagination and drawing accurate muscles.

3. break it down more (values) try to draw all the different values there is... the world isnt black and white... (oooh, poetic )

4. draw draw draw draw draw draw draw draw draw!


and you're on your way man, killer stuff so far, last posts are the best... like the guy flexing his shoulder/back towards us.. got something there!


cheers man and keep on fighting!

[4rt-r41d]

hi there!

my critique would be:

1. keep doing anatomy studies

2. dont draw yourself tired of doing studies, mix em into imaginery pieces...like, draw an orc but you do a muscle study while you do it, in that way you're practising imagination and drawing accurate muscles.

3. break it down more (values) try to draw all the different values there is... the world isnt black and white... (oooh, poetic )

4. draw draw draw draw draw draw draw draw draw!


and you're on your way man, killer stuff so far, last posts are the best... like the guy flexing his shoulder/back towards us.. got something there!


cheers man and keep on fighting!

Hi thanks for the crits.
yeah i wil ltry that . but right now i dont have any scanner so i dont know when i will be able to update again
i will try to make an imaginary pic at the same time a do astudy of something :d sound fun. thanks



MIKECORRIERO: thanks man, yeah i will do that, thanks for the help,
and by the way, love your stuff
thanks again,
cya

[RMulhearne]

Try to think of the figure as a whole, instead of concentrating on each part seperatly.

[4rt-r41d]

ok, i have not got a scanner for a long time
this is all ive managed to do, its not much.
hope to be more frequent in the near future.
ok here comes the stuff..

























thats all fot this time

Rebecca: thanks for the advice.

[Profil]

ser bra ut som sagt
när du ritar, istället för att göra en linje runt allt, försök att kanske skugga mer, t ex läpparna, så ser det verkligare ut. Prova på att göra gråskalor med en sorts hårdhet/mjukhet på pennan.
Studera anatomi t ex döskallar och rita från livet.

Rita på

[Sems]

really like those last ones with the dark shadows in them and the portraits are really good keep drawing and posting

[gafmar]

Hey ya have some cool studies goin on here ( Im bad at thows) No crits from me thow hahaha, just keep it up



my sketch book: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...ghlight=gaffer

[Gloominati]

It's really good that you're training your anatomy skills, keep at it, you have improved a whole bunch since your first post here.
As an advice: this bobybuilder guys look kinda nice, but try to draw some anatomystudies of 'normal' shaped people. Just avoid that all the people you draw will have this bodybuilder look. Keep at it man!

[P E N Ricklund]

Your doing great.

Don't have much crits. I think people have written some really good one's here, keep them in mind when you draw and this will be great
I'd like to see more things coming from you, not just reffs.

Keep on drawing

[Hyver]

last update on july 6th?

get cracking dude

[rodrigo!]

nice man,
id like to add on to hurris comments to say try to understand more of the muscles if you can as in the way they work...it might help when you draw musclular people's photos, as you will know more about what youre drawing.

i would also suggest especially wen drawing hands to draw them as cylinders and blocks, breaking it down into simple 3D shapes helps so much and it will give them a more 3D feel.

[4rt-r41d]

nice man,
id like to add on to hurris comments to say try to understand more of the muscles if you can as in the way they work...it might help when you draw musclular people's photos, as you will know more about what youre drawing.

i would also suggest especially wen drawing hands to draw them as cylinders and blocks, breaking it down into simple 3D shapes helps so much and it will give them a more 3D feel.

ok thanks man, ill try to that with the hands

[Hazamataz]

I like the last portraits, really dramatic. They show a good consideration of value like hurricane advised. And I especially like your portraits in movement, like the drinking one.

Cool to here your moving to the UK, i'm sure you'll like it here. I'm sure there will be plenty of transport (in answer to your question in the UK thread) and i'll keep you informed with Artsy stuff going on.

[McLean]

hey man, stick with it! Maybe spend just as much time drawing from artists' anatomy books as you are fitness magazines (or maybe you are already). Also, you'll save a little money if you just cram everything you possibly can onto sketchbook pages....actually its not even about money, its just about learning to utilize the space given to you to the fullest. See how much stuff you can fit on there until you just have NO more space at all!

peace out homie!

[omni1]

poratrait work is good -- love the progression so far, i agree with rebecca try to think of it as a whole figure-- keep trukin ' ((toot toot))

[4rt-r41d]

I like the last portraits, really dramatic. They show a good consideration of value like hurricane advised. And I especially like your portraits in movement, like the drinking one.

Cool to here your moving to the UK, i'm sure you'll like it here. I'm sure there will be plenty of transport (in answer to your question in the UK thread) and i'll keep you informed with Artsy stuff going on.

yeah i am only a little worried about that the residental services is so extremly bad at the school im attending otherwise i think ill like it.
it seems cool. yeah thanks on the crits. most welcome

omni1: thanks ill keep that in mind

McLean: ok i will try that thanks alot

[4rt-r41d]

Hiya,
im here with a mini update. i am currently visiting my old school,. and tehy do have a scanner so i drew 2 pages and scanned em
might draw some more for tonight

well well here they are. crits ans comments are most welcome

a series of heads



some other quick stuff



thants all for now., cya soon

[arghmisfit]

the heads are looking good. you got some proportional issues on the 2nd page, so just keep practicing the anatomy, take your time on a couple studies really nailing down the proportions and shapes, then you can speed up your studies when u become more familiar with the subject

good luck with school

[Badger]

Nice work, this one is my favourite.
Try using the side of your pencil to get rid of that scratchy feel, and it's much quicker.
Some imaginative stuff would be cool.
Keep on at it, i don't do nearly enough anatomy work.
-B-

[Diego]

Good stuff man, really like that heads.
Try to work on your values. And keep up with anatomy.
Good luck and keep posting.