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    Aye!!
    update again
    still using hte camera. so the quality is bad,, need to get the scanner again..

    Mortem: Thanks honey , ill try the middletomnes next time, Hugs


    a foot studie, my feet is ugly
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    and some hand studies,, i need to make more of these, they are actually fun to do,
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    hands!
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    i got tired of studies, so i did this guy
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    thats all for today. more to come tomorrow,

    Peace

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    keep workin on your studies. also work on your proportions too. I dont know what you think about when you are sketching, but try thinking in more simple and basic shapes. I feel that you are working too hard on making it exactly what it is. keep up the good practices.

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    I agree with above, keep up the studies u are definitely improving. Make sure u think about construction when u are drawing though, expecially when drawing from ur imagination. Some of your head drawings seem to lack solidity which is a result of not thinking of them as 3 dimensional objects. Keep it up

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    Aye,
    update again, since it been a while,
    still using camera,, ,sux...
    and some are old thou..

    Seets_ thanks for the comments. cheers

    Matt smith: thanks for hte comments and crits.

    here they are.

    a wierd pic of an overweight guy. kinda rushed
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    oooold hand.
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    ehm,,, no comment,
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    some faield face.
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    and the minotaur sketch for my thunderdome, i got fantastic critic by Rodrigo on this, i have not changed it yet, he pointed out loads of errors, will post the finished one aswell. just wanted to add this one.
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    and here is the same again, just with a little colour, the progress sketch from the thunderdome,
    i wont use this one,. it will get corrected
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    cheers

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    Heya babe!

    I like your last stuff. Studies are great, keep doing them!
    The tauren looks nice. Some crits here,
    His legs needs more attention, check out some of the anatomy there too.
    His right shoulder (our left) seems very pushed forward, I'm not all sure about this but I think it should be a little bit pushed back (less visible)
    and last, his head is kinda flat. Try pushing the nose area more.

    Ya, hope the crit is worth something. I'm very very tired today, sorry ~~;

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    Aye
    here comes the next update. smaller but anyway.

    MorteM: cheers babe, your crits and comments are always a big help for me, thanks a lot

    still using camera thats why the quality sucks.
    here is some life drawing ive made, enjoy

    here is a portrait, dont know but not longer hten 15 minutes.
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    not sure about time, but life drawing is fun
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    and another one
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    and some more tweaks on teh minotaur...
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    cheers

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    great progress !!
    i love the portreits

    cheers!


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    ‡‡‡‡‡ BadToTheBone ‡‡‡‡‡

    Nice thread the portraits show promise <> the placement of features is critical and the the initial construction lines the life or death to the drawing,

    Eyes <> the inside corners of the eyes should always in in alignment regardless of position or aspect of the head <> the outside corners of the eyes will also be in alignment.

    This is the important part the inside corners and the outside corners should not be on the side alignment.

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    You've a really good SB going here, though I agree with hurricane: it does look like you're trying too hard. Loosen up, follow the lines and flow of the shapes and enjoy it~ If it's boring as hell, or if you're tired, try to make it fun by adding something like silly captions or a mini mascot making comments/gestures. <---this could serve as self-critiquing in a more enjoyable, maybe humorous, form.

    *Wonderful* portraits and hand studies!

    Keep' em coming~ and thanks for posting in my SB!

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    Quick silver: cheers, yours is lovly too. thansk for the crit, ill keep that in mind

    Mentler: cheers man, thanks alot for the comments and crits!

    Hurricane: youre the man!


    One session in oc with hurri
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    a sketch for a caricature on a friend
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    my first 3ch painting 20 minutes
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    a cat
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    dude
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    thats all for this time,. cheers

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    ok, hammer time

    first of i mirrored the image to show it easier..
    1. you need to either have it in a "hard edged, no fade" style or shade it all, atm it looks just rushed. so i've done 2 exampels of the arm, do you see the difference?

    2. With the decition from 1. (i presume it's shading) you need to work the form more, you suggest the shape/form with a solid area, and 100%pressure.. i made a exampel there, do you see how i've worked the lines? its the same value but just faded and changed in its rythm...you can almost see the form of the cloth... SO, you need to work on your brushwork... do form studies, where you lower the opacity and use a airbrush and work the transitions! do lit spheres!

    3. draw better lines, longer ones...i redrew the line on the right side until i got it right, do it too... don't give up and studder the lines...more confidence...because it's digital ctrl+z is your friend!

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    now for the good things!
    MAJOR progress!
    the hand and cat pic....hands are great !! alittle too yellow but still huge steps !
    i see alot of increased confidence and steps in the right direction !


    come on now, work it
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    looking good big man, take hurris crit to your heart, I know I just did

    Hugs!

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    Yeah man, there is alot of progress here - I'll agree with whoever further up the thread said "draw through" more - it forces you to think of everything as 3d-objects.

    Oh, and do follow Hurri's crit - especially when it comes to line confidence. It might be messy at first but the improvement you'll get from it is amazing.

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    PLenty of improvement to be seen here dude. Liked your pieces that deal with foreshortening and over the top views.

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    Ok, here is a small update.
    some drawings that are used later for a cd cover for class.

    hope you like em,

    about 1.5 hours:
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    and about teh same 1.5 hours
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    about 20mins:
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    about 15 mins (i hate this one)
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    and the actual cover:
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    cheers.

    Hurricane: cheers for that badass crit!
    Pencilator: thansk man , catch you on msn!
    ohjay: cheers, ill try to do that,
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    ok, havent scanned anything, about to do that sooon,
    here is a quick oc ive made, during a session with alert.

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    cheers

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    You've made a big improvement, man, this is great!
    I dig the last few graphite pieces. I'd love to see you try your hand at more creatures
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    dude, the oc sketch is alittle rushed but the progress is there, i can see that you have started to "see" what is missing, now the only thing that is left is to beat it into your hands by pure repetition!

    keep at it bro, and feel free to ask anything on msn!

    cheers !


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    hey,thanx for droppin by my sb.
    i'll try to return the favour.

    from what i see so far i can say you should probably stop shading for some time and return to pure lineart drawings. try to get your pics to look "3d" with lines only (meaning lineweight). i'm having trouble with that sometimes myself,but i'm working on it,and so should you. train your anatomy,and your line security. you're scribbling quite alot where you could draw one straight line. one way to solve that which i found recently is to simply draw in inks. using ink pens forces you to think carefully before laying down your strokes and it also helps you with seeing contrasts. although in this case i'd perhaps go back to anatomy books and lifedrawing abit more before going freehand. although you could try to draw with ink from anatomy books...hmm...i should attempt that myself.(EDIT: didn't browse thorougly,only saw page one,this stuff's alot better)
    anyways, work on the basics abit more,so you know them more or less in-and-out. that way you'll have alot easier time with shading f.ex.
    keep it up

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    hey man, good stuff going on here.
    When you're doing studies, try to really see the subject, not just put the lines in the paper, see and see. You'll save the lines in your head, you'll process it and then you'll be able to really put a worthy line.
    I like what you're doing with your shadows, learn to see where the shadow pattern is a then block it with a soft line, then work your way from there.
    Anyways, as said before, draw draw draw, is the more efficient way of achieve your goal.
    Cheers bud

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    Yeah, wow, those pencils for CD cover show a lot of sophistication! Keep up the balance of life drawing and drawing from ref. Keep it up and you'll get more confidence in your line. Great progress so far.

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    You certainly are getting there! Keep up to good work!

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    Hey hey hey
    heres a brief update. more to come when i get my hands on the bloody a3 scanner.

    first some shit for class:
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    and:
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    and a random sketch:
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    Jakian: cheers man, ill try

    Andy P: thanks, i try to, but uni takes a lot of work,

    Diego: cheers man, ill take your crit to my heart

    Carnifex: yeah. ill try to scribble yes, thanks alot for that long and good crit

    hurricane: cheers mate, ill start with my master studies soon that means study your paintings

    Interceptor: thanks alot!

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    nice!

    i like the pic with the hand and the gun!

    cheers dude and keep at it!


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    hey! yes i can see a great improvement from your first posts! i reall ylike your face study towards the top on the first page of the woman its good! and your CD cover sketches on this page are really good too. its great that you do so much drawing from life and anatomy studies- which is everything that i need to do!! keep it up !

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    Hurricane: thanks man. you kick ass

    lefran: thanks, i need to alot more drawing, cya

    ok, heres an illustration for class:
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    cheers

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    Hey babe
    Really nice stuff there with the cd-cover design. Keep at it!
    Like your latest one too, keep working on it. I wonder how it would look if you gave the boy some colours, instead of making him all blue.
    Try looking for some underwater view references

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    what MorteM said, plus make the boy smile too ?

    cheers, looking good!


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    ey.
    here are some quick stuff ive managed to do, im hepling my girl to move so it aint a lot of time for that.

    MorteM: cheers babe
    Hurricane: thanks

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