Hello, I just recently found this site, so this will be my first post. I've been trying to teach myself for awhile, and in doing so I've found it nearly impossible to get any techincal feedback.
Here is a a more finished sketchbook drawing, that seems to fail for some reason. Posting it to an art archive, it took longer for the moderators to approve than the others and it gets much fewer hits than other similar drawings.
So, I was wondering if anyone could point out this or that about it: