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    hey guys!

    I'm starting a new sketchbook. Hope you like! C&C welcome!

    1. Mastercopy

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    2. Older Stuff

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    3. Older Stuff

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    4. One from today

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    5. And a try with coffee

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    Seems like this host doesn't allow direkt linking, I'll work on that, promise...
    Thanks for watching!

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    keep going . From the looks of it - just comparing older stuff to newer stuff..i see a lot less of those curvy bubbly lines...which alot of beginners use too much. Push that...mix up the curvey lines with straighter lines. And draw from life. I'll type that again...draw from life draw from life draw from life...Direct observation is the best way to improve yor skills.

    good luck...keep posting...and painting with coffee!

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    I can see why it doesn't allow U because they aren't in gif or jpec format. U should try photobucket.com. It's free and easy.

    The best pic size for the web is H 640 x W 480. I also recomment saving your pics in JPEC format because it takes less space and less time to download to view the pics.

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    keep em coming and keep it up
    glad to see some stuff it´s been a while!

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    Thanks for the comments!

    loomer - Man, it's so hard to improve linequality... But i'll work on it! And yes... I have to draw more from life...

    Anant - Changed to photobucket, and it seems to work now...

    Dan - Right, it's been a while. Hope to see you in Remscheid the next days... I'm curious about your stuff!

    a short update...

    6-9 Playing around with Charles Bargues Ref...

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    9. Head study

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    *lol
    you ain't possibly the marvelous Mattes Klütsch, ex Herder-School-Student, notorious for NOT being a mathematical genius? ;-)

    btw, love that coffee-piece (yeah, coffee really is a nice medium)

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    good stuff, much better than me, only thing i see wrong is some of the ears, look a bit strange.
    how long you been drawing?

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    YES! I´m REALLY happy that you are posting again. The Head Study is great. You are doing well.

    Now, DON`T STOP POSTING! I WILL SEARCH FOR YOUR THREAD EVERY DAY!!!

    Hey, haste nächste Woche mal Zeit mit mir und Dan zu skribbeln?

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    PeteParker- No, I'm not Mattes, but that math-thing might be 'klütsch' related...

    Karma0Zero- Yes, I hate ears... don't know why, but i always get 'sloppy', when drawing them... I draw for about 2 1/2 years.

    Robolus- Hi Robby! Leider habe ich keine Zeit, ausser Abends... Aber ihr seid natürlich willkommen


    Only a small update again, my scanner is killing me... I'll buy a new one next week... (btw, sorry for the crappy quality)

    10. A doodle 'freshed up' with coffee

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    11. Master copies

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    New scanner!

    12. A quick nude -photoref

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    13. Mastercopy

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    14. Mastercopy

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    Uh, oh, new Klütsch stuff!
    Ahh, you have a new Scanner (wurde auch Zeit mein Freund).

    The Mastercopies are sweet man, your lines are more confident.
    Now try too improve your crosshatching (remember: crosshatching is goood)!

    ...more!!!

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    mr.kluetsch it's sooo good seeing you posting again. It's been far too long since I've seen any artwork from you, pal.
    The Barques studies look great, as do the mastercopies. Keep drawing

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    Thanks, Steven! I enjoyed your stuff too! We have to meet, man!!!

    15. Figures from Tiepolo

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    16. another mastercopy

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    17. Feet (Bammes) Focused on hatching (for Robolus) and failed...

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    18. Another Bammes and hatchings again (that hand made me mad...)

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    19. Loomis hands

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    20. Loomis hands again

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    21. and than tried to draw my own hand

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    hope you like!

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    you´ve really outdone yourself with those hands monsieur kl(umlaut)utsch!



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    Thanks for your kind words, mr. dan v d!

    More Hands

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    24. and Loomis heads

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    C&C welcome!

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    You´re improving great my friend. The last sketch of the old woman is very good. No crit, just keep continuing.

    Eine Sache noch, Hände sind verteufelt schwer. Ich machs mir beim lifedrawing so leicht wie möglich damit und achte anfangs nur auf die Masse der Hand, und versuche das block-in mit wenigen Strichen zügig, aber genaustens hinzukriegen. Wenn das alles stimmt,
    sind dann die Finger weniger problematisch.

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    I really enjoy your studies, they are great! Keep drawing hands! I'm a freak about hands, so I love them. Also keep doing the loomis studies, they will really help you improve. Don't forget about drawing from life, though. Good work.

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    nice faces!

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    nice update. the last two faces are great. Just continue to do your studies
    Yeah we should meet sometime soon. I promise as soon as my bank account allows so, I'll come visit you!

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    Thanks guys!

    A new update:

    25. Loomis head

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    26. Loomis head

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    27. and a Loomis head

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    28. No Ref head after the Loomis studies (well.... )

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    29. Phone doodle

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    Hope you like...

    P.S.: What about a new sketch-group-meeting? The weather is getting better again, so let's go out and draw!

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    Good..

    i like the first face...but the 2nd the 3rd and forth drawing y u didn't put in mind ...the Cylinder form, the cube Form, Sphere...that will help...keep it up...cheerssss..

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    Yes, maybe i focused to much on drawing the lines, when copying the pieces...

    30. Really overdone...

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    31. Loomis

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    32. Loomis

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    33. A nude with ref

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    34. oil study

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    35. oil study

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    36. with photo ref

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    37. A quick Bargues study, but something looks wrong...

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    38. Unfinished portrait - photo ref

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    hope u like...

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    Hey Alex, ich schreib dir mal auf Deutsch. Bin gerade denkfaul, und Englisch schreiben wär jetzt viiiel zu anstrengend. Die letzte Bargue Studie ist gut, ich weiß aber das du´s besser kannst. Die Proportionen an sich, sprich die Länge der einzelnen Körperteile hast du sehr gut hinbekommen. Der nächste Schritt auf den du achten mußt sind die Feinheiten in den Konturen. Vergleiche die Konturen des ausgestreckten Beines mit den Konturen von C. Bargue. Selbst kaum wahrnehmbare Kurven und Erhebungen haben eine Bedeutung und stellen Muskeln und Knochen dar. Diese mußt du dir einprägen und genaustens übertragen. Zeichne leicht vor, kontrolliere erst die Proportionen und dann achte auf die Feinheiten der Kontur. Vergleiche deine fertigen Zeichnungen IMMER mit dem Original um Fehler zu entdecken. Es gibt dann diesen Aha-Effekt wie z.Bsp.: "Ups, ich hab schon wieder die Knie falsch gezeichnet, hmm, was ist den das für eine blöde kleine Kurve unterhalb der Kniescheibe? Ich check das mal im Bammes nach..., aha, jetzt kapier ichs!"

    MERKE: Fehler sind gut!!! (aber nur dann wenn du sie auch bemerkst, also erst zeichnen, dann auf Fehlersuche gehen)

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    you're getting better and better! it's so much fun to watch!


    cheers man and keep on fighting !


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    the oil studies are sooper dooper keep it up man!

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    Many Thanks guys! Of course i'll keep on fighting

    I tried to overwork the last Bargue study, after reading Robolus comment and calling him. I tried to be more correct on the single lines, and understand them. I didn't erase the former lines, so you can see the changes.

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    Hi! Haven't had internet for the last weeks, but now i post again!

    39. Oil after photo-ref.

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    Unfortunaly it loses contrast and the original colours after scanning it. Is there a trick to scan oils with a better result?

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    kölnkölnköln

    draussen knallt die sonne und ich depp schwitze vorm rechner
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    tolle skizzen, freu mich auf updates!

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