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April 6th, 2005 #14Registered User
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Thanks, everybody!!! I certainly appreciate the comments. keep them coming!
Hide this ad by registering as a memberApril 6th, 2005 #15
man i loved the initial set of pages you showed before, but this just steps it up
haha sweet job man, is it all illustrator? i like the line work, no crits here
April 6th, 2005 #16
Very nice, I like it a lot, but also have some constructive tips:
Page09,panel1: Too complicated. Maybe you can remove running boy in first plane.
Page10,panel2: You can do it more dynamic.
Page11/12: It seems to missing some part of the story
page14,panel5: It not quite recognisible that sword is near to see saw
Page16: panels 1,2: This is lot confusing to me.
panel 6: could go without border
Page 19: too much same tings. I like It a lot in previus pages, but here is too much.
April 7th, 2005 #17
do oyu have a pdf of your comic?
if yes, pleasssssssssssseeeee put
it in , thats cool comic thx
April 9th, 2005 #18
I nearly cried at the end, such a parting of ways was never before seen...
I am THE RULER OF: Swissconsin- The only state made purely out of cheese! Bow to me the emperor pirate as I send ninja cheese warriors after you!
let's not forget the Pimp of Doom!
You look upon the ruins and wonder of who could have commited such a crime, then you catch a whiff of stinky cheese...