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    Thanks, everybody!!! I certainly appreciate the comments. keep them coming!

    ERICH

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    man i loved the initial set of pages you showed before, but this just steps it up

    haha sweet job man, is it all illustrator? i like the line work, no crits here

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    Very nice, I like it a lot, but also have some constructive tips:
    Page09,panel1: Too complicated. Maybe you can remove running boy in first plane.
    Page10,panel2: You can do it more dynamic.
    Page11/12: It seems to missing some part of the story
    page14,panel5: It not quite recognisible that sword is near to see saw
    Page16: panels 1,2: This is lot confusing to me.
    panel 6: could go without border
    Page 19: too much same tings. I like It a lot in previus pages, but here is too much.

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    hey erich

    do oyu have a pdf of your comic?
    if yes, pleasssssssssssseeeee put
    it in , thats cool comic thx

    kappei

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    I nearly cried at the end, such a parting of ways was never before seen...



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    You look upon the ruins and wonder of who could have commited such a crime, then you catch a whiff of stinky cheese...
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