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March 30th, 2005 #1
Deus Ex // Man made machine made man
I have been really busy lately so I haven't posted here in a while. Anyway countless hours have gone into this and I just have to put it away for a while so we'll call it "finished." C+C Welcome.
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March 30th, 2005 #3
yes, this is pretty great stuff here seven... I also like the grafic element here... I personally dont like the design of the droid/ robot but, thats just a matter of taste and not qaulity of work... great work overall
Mainloop- man i must be dyslexic.. cuz i thought you asked how many people are on lsd
March 30th, 2005 #4
Se7en! Glad to see you back, man. This is really good, probably the best thing I've seen you do. The value difference between the legs is a little disturbing, but it's sweet (looking at it too long: the boobs seem different sized and is that an outie bellybutton?)
March 30th, 2005 #5
To me its kinda lifeless and boring - well rendered maybe but doesn't create any emotional impact. Oh well.
thanks for the feedback so far.
April 1st, 2005 #6
Anyone else have suggestions? How can I made this piece more dramatic?
I don't know if I should admit this or not but I have probably spent over 60 hours on this so far. Thats way too much time for it not to be great - if you know what I mean : )
April 1st, 2005 #7
Well, frankly, we're detached from the piece. Now, the view is dramatic and she's coming at us, but there's little drama. Right now, she's just a 90' robo-babe shopping for shoes and we're at the corner cafe', sipping a latte with non-fat milk. That's kind of the charm of the piece, though.
"Bill, there's a ten story naked android coming down the street."
"Is it a female model?"
"Yeah, I guess so..."
"Third this week."
For more drama in this, one way to go is to get a little more extreme with your perspective work and give us a view of our fellow citizens in varied states of panic (you only need to get to their faces), or perhaps, in this view, a trail of wreckage with armed flitters firing uselessly at the unstoppable behemoth.
Time-wise, it's all about mileage, man. The more you work, the faster you'll get. Hope this helps.
April 28th, 2005 #8
ye! thats what iam talking about!
maybe i litle bit too much of deviantart in it, but its great
April 28th, 2005 #9
more dramatic... you can put a huge spaceship in the sky just passing her from behind.. or maybe a lot of birds or some knocked dude with brused face crawling.. grabing her leg or fallin.. cause it looks like she's on the edge ((:
sorry for bad advices
dogfood: nice story
April 28th, 2005 #10
hands... her hands are dumb. If you wanna add some drama to your piece, let her hands talk.
April 28th, 2005 #11
I think the perspective draws your eyes up to the sky so maybe something going on there would help but man this is really good.
If i shoot the J then its "Good"
please hit up the SKETCHBOOK
April 28th, 2005 #12
I didnt even notice the birds at first. You might want to make one or two birds closer up. Also, I think you should use a wider range of colors on her, buildings and the sky.
April 29th, 2005 #13