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    this one looke realy cool to me... like your other work to.. hope to see more soon.

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    Nice sketchbook I really like what i'm seeing for someone so young wow! Keep up the good work!!

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    this stuff looks good man ... we teenagers rock these boards ... lol

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    oma: Thanks, I'm glad you like 'em.
    ashrumm: Thanks, I'll try.
    Burning Eyes: Cheers, Yep, lots of talented teens here.

    Here's a sketch I did today. I started it off by randomly scribbling around and eventually it ended up as a robot.

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    wow, that last one is very cool !! me likes, keep it up!

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    Really cool book! I just have one little crit: some of yout images could use some harder edges, but they're very good nonetheless.
    The last robot is very good, and I love the Nord in the previous page.
    Good work, keep it up!

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    You've got some pretty cool pics here Proteus. I especially like the red armored guy shooting the alien plants (?).

    One thing I noticed is that your brush strokes tend to be very visible, which I would try to get away from. There is a point where that visibility turns into an asset, but right now you've got too many strokes. Maybe try smudging larger areas a bit to work out the lines, and also try to incorporate some more hard shadows and highlights in your work. Make them work for you around the edges of armor plates and such and it will give your image more kick.


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    Dile: Thanks Dude.
    entdroid: Thanks, I agree with your crit, I'll definitly be using some harder edges.
    dfacto: Thanks man, I tried to apply your advice to the robot sketch. I think it looks a lot better now. Thanks.

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    that one looks very nice cleaned up... keep it up!

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    yo man, that likes really nice. Throw some colour on it though and pump up the contrast Look at that bot steak-tron did in the MB portfolio, for good use of colour on a bot!

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    you have some nice stuff in here. i especially like this one: http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y52...match72_td.jpg very nice work, only crit i have is on this one: http://conceptart.org/forums/attachm...1&d=1155829808 i know it's a speedy and it's easy to overlook stuff in speedys but the character in it is being attacked by swarms of monsters, but at the same time looks like he's taking a brisk walk along the beach, a little bit "overly chill" about the situation at hand. He looks like he can't decide if he should dangle the gun over the bloodthirsty creature a little longer or if he should instead take another sip of his fat free latte. hope i'm not bein to harsh, he just needs a little more dynamicism in his pose in my opinion.
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    Enjoying your stuff already. The quadriped blue creature has nice bulk and an awesome pose. Lots of other good stuff too.
    I agree with artzealot, the pose in that piece could really make it shine. You look like the guy who can handle the job

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    wow sir, the amount of improvement is staggering.

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    Thanks for all the comments guys.

    It has been more than a month since my last update...

    Here are a few things thing I've done recently.

    My LMS TD round 2 entry, and a couple of quick random sketches.

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    insane stuff man.
    I like it alot! Where are those pencilsketches you promised us tho?
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    hehe awesome stuff! is that last one Banksy inspired?

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    holy shit dude, you rock!
    great stuff, yer one year younger and you already kick ass.The first in post 75 is sooooo jakkas-style, wonderful.Seriously, you've got some great stuff in here, keep it up and it will reach 5 stars in no time!

    ciao

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    I love the composition in that first one of your last batch. Really nice stuff!

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    Tigermilk: Thanks. Ah, I forgot about that... I'll try to post some sometime this week.

    rblitz7: Cheers. Nah, it was just a random thing.

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    Update!

    Haven't posted in quite a long time ... so here are a few things from throughout this year.

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    Cool stuff !
    Post more often dude, it's been more than a year since your last post
    Keep working !

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    DanielC: Thanks.


    I got Colors! for DS the other day. (link)

    Some stuff I've done with it so far.

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    cool pieces man- really diggin that guy a couple pages back who is split in half by fire....

    tight

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    nice stuff dude!!
    liked your portraits and those robots are cool!!

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    Continuing my daily updates!

    A robot I just started , I'll work on it some more tomorrow.
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    Crits on anything?

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    Amasing progress, and in such a short time. I really like the arctic pic in post #75, the one beside it is also very nice! The last update really shows how good you've become. I didn't know the DS had such a good painting feature. Neato!

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    I like how your paints look. You have some nice and clean tehcniques

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    Some really nifty stuff!!

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    On this DS Colours piece, I think the clouds could be more horizontally straight. You could also mix up the tones in the sky I think. It would probably say more if the road was more exposed, more to the left/his right. moving the car further down the road would also tighten up the composition.

    It was really nice meeting you Josh, hopefully we can have a sketchmeet sometime. Come to Auckland!

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