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March 19th, 2005 #1
Fin - 1 APR 11 - x1
1st April 2011: Check latest post for new pix (1).
This stuff's pretty old
December 2004: I've been building up an alien race since 2002. This is an old sketch I should fix up, but I never get around to doing it :p I need to redo his torso and legs.
Stuff from February 2005:
I just got a tablet (yay). WIP shot of my first real try at digital 'painting'. You can see the finished version here. I suck at BGs.
Silly little page o' props! I never got around to finishing this.
Random torso, no refs. Futzing about with the new tablet.
Wolves; simple sketches. Done from photos.
I've been doing life drawing classes recently and more photo sketches, but with Mr. Scanner out of action I can't show 'em.
So, um, critique away.
Last edited by fionkell; April 1st, 2011 at 04:31 AM. Reason: Updated pics
March 19th, 2005 #2
Don't be apprehensive, there is no need. Your works very well. And your seventeen. It means you have a lot of time to improve your capacity. My only crit is about second picture. The half of background is emty so it seems this work not completed. Do you think to put there something? If you don't you can cut there, but if you ask me, another bird could be there. Keep on working my friend.
March 19th, 2005 #3
March 20th, 2005 #4
March 20th, 2005 #5
Pretty nice bach of works, Im likeing this;
specialy the blue Griffon, as far as critics goes
the "arm less torso" study has sum problems In the
way you attached the deltoids to the
clavicle & shoulder blades bones, you see the deltoids
goes over the pectorals; you drawed 4 seccions in the abdominals
but they are only 6 muscles there, take a look to Kevin Chen´s studies
they are great for you to start develping a solid construccion
metod for your figures:
http://www.angelfire.com/art3/kchendemos/mail to: firstname.lastname@example.org
March 21st, 2005 #6
mert_yavasca: Thanks The landscape was done last, so I rushed it (I'm not very good at them...). I'll work on them more.
rodrigo!: Hey, thanks. Vis Comm is really good so far, especially the drawing course I am doing. I replied in your sketchbook thread with some more info.
maxetormer: That's a sweet critique I'll go and check his stuff out now, thankyou!
October 16th, 2005 #7
Haha, to tell you the truth Rodrigo, you're helping me a lot more than some of my teachers in class Cheers!
I'll dig out the sketchable carp later, here's a colour splat for now (lines are by DieOxin). 2 hours yesterday. I'm kind of directionless when I try to colour something...
October 16th, 2005 #8
wow, really great start here...the only crit i have is you need to gesture out your anatomy studies more right now...they don't have the rhythm that is essential to a good figure yet. these muscle studies are healthy for you but you're missing one of the foundations
keep up the digital works!
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October 16th, 2005 #9
October 16th, 2005 #10
I do love your style!
January 18th, 2006 #11
Frak me, I haven't touched this since October. Yikes. I have been drawing a fair bit though, here's the more recent stuff. Some from magazines, some from my head:
More to come! It's my New Year's resolution (that, and getting a portfolio together).
January 19th, 2006 #12
nice work so far especially with the hands.
rendering on the sypriss is good!
in the last one the face, some features look a bit flat, like the lips and eyes, try working in some darker shadows and shading with the form more, some closeup studies of these features might help too.
January 27th, 2006 #13
February 4th, 2006 #14
Hey look, 2nd update in less than a month. That's an improvement, right? Right? 10 more pages from my sketchbook, of varying age (all from 2006 though).
Two from Hogarth, and two from my noggin:
From the noggin (ick):
Loomis and other:
Random Loomis + heads:
Big page of brainspew
Apathy: Alright, because you said so :p Heh, I might have some stuff for the colouring book thread soon...
Rodrigo: I'll get to work on that, maybe I should try a looser style of sketching?
February 7th, 2006 #15