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    1st April 2011: Check latest post for new pix (1).




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    This stuff's pretty old

    December 2004: I've been building up an alien race since 2002. This is an old sketch I should fix up, but I never get around to doing it :p I need to redo his torso and legs.
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    Stuff from February 2005:
    I just got a tablet (yay). WIP shot of my first real try at digital 'painting'. You can see the finished version here. I suck at BGs.
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    Silly little page o' props! I never got around to finishing this.
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    Random torso, no refs. Futzing about with the new tablet.
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    Wolves; simple sketches. Done from photos.
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    I've been doing life drawing classes recently and more photo sketches, but with Mr. Scanner out of action I can't show 'em.

    So, um, critique away.
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    Don't be apprehensive, there is no need. Your works very well. And your seventeen. It means you have a lot of time to improve your capacity. My only crit is about second picture. The half of background is emty so it seems this work not completed. Do you think to put there something? If you don't you can cut there, but if you ask me, another bird could be there. Keep on working my friend.
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    ooopps!!!
    I didn't see the link to finished picture. But if you ask me again, a bird could be there instead of the landscape.
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    cool stuff,
    i see u r doing b.visual communication at uni, thats the course i was thinking of applying for later this year...whats it like?
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    Pretty nice bach of works, Im likeing this;
    specialy the blue Griffon, as far as critics goes
    the "arm less torso" study has sum problems In the
    way you attached the deltoids to the
    clavicle & shoulder blades bones, you see the deltoids
    goes over the pectorals; you drawed 4 seccions in the abdominals
    but they are only 6 muscles there, take a look to Kevin Chen´s studies
    they are great for you to start develping a solid construccion
    metod for your figures:

    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/sho...?t=1432&page=4

    http://www.angelfire.com/art3/kchendemos/
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    mert_yavasca: Thanks The landscape was done last, so I rushed it (I'm not very good at them...). I'll work on them more.

    rodrigo!: Hey, thanks. Vis Comm is really good so far, especially the drawing course I am doing. I replied in your sketchbook thread with some more info.

    maxetormer: That's a sweet critique I'll go and check his stuff out now, thankyou!
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    Haha, to tell you the truth Rodrigo, you're helping me a lot more than some of my teachers in class Cheers!

    I'll dig out the sketchable carp later, here's a colour splat for now (lines are by DieOxin). 2 hours yesterday. I'm kind of directionless when I try to colour something...
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    wow, really great start here...the only crit i have is you need to gesture out your anatomy studies more right now...they don't have the rhythm that is essential to a good figure yet. these muscle studies are healthy for you but you're missing one of the foundations

    keep up the digital works!
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    Apollo: Thanks So you mean, like, do looser and less 'blocky' sorts of sketches of the figures as well?
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    I do love your style!
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    Frak me, I haven't touched this since October. Yikes. I have been drawing a fair bit though, here's the more recent stuff. Some from magazines, some from my head:

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    More to come! It's my New Year's resolution (that, and getting a portfolio together).
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    nice work so far especially with the hands.
    rendering on the sypriss is good!
    in the last one the face, some features look a bit flat, like the lips and eyes, try working in some darker shadows and shading with the form more, some closeup studies of these features might help too.
    cheers
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    Sypriss is really stunning, I can just picture it in full color . *Wink... wink*

    Now... what happened to your New Years Resolution? You can't break those until like March... get working and get posting!
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