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    remembrances of a killer (new version)

    It's my last photoshop work. I made it today. The old man was my imaginary sketch. Then I realized that he has got killer's eyes. I painted it in photshop and then I put some photo on background. I hope you enjoy and critic me.
    remembrances of a killer (new version)

    Thanks for your time.

    Last edited by mert_yavasca; March 24th, 2005 at 11:53 AM. Reason: update
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    This isn't too bad, but the background appears to be a filtered photo and doesn't really go with the image. If it did, I would say the light would be influencing the left side of his face with some secondary lighting. I also think his mouth and right cheek could be tightened up a bit.

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    Good crits dogfood. Thank you. I did it two days ago now I don't like it. I tink I must change background and some work in composition. It wil be back soon. (If you mind) Ender sen diyosun?
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    This is the first sketch of this work. Im on it. I want to change the backgroung. Wellcome all your comments about background.
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    Hey , cool,

    apply some light to the face and his head. Now it seems hes standing back to a picture or so. Make the glasses and his face alittle more stronger, like, bettter strokes. Make it somehow more realistic.
    Its gonna be awesome.
    Hope it helped.

    Keep it cool
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