sweet! I dont knwo why but I think the smile at the end reminds me more of bevis and butthead... not wanting to be insulting or anything like that, but it did.
Also, like previously mentiond, it's GREATLY done without dialogue! and the best aprt about that is that it can be easilly interpreted into another language (just change the ad, and that's it).
You also make the ninja fit in well because of the lack of dialogue. A ninja really shouldnt talk much, and it might be best then -- as you did -- not ot let anyone talk.
.... and well, lets face it. I just wanna go out and order my own ninja now. see what you've done? I hope you're happy!
"And so the valley cried with anger: "mount your horses draw your swords!" and so they killed hte mountain people and they won their jsut rewards. Soon they stood beside the treasure ont he moutain dark and red, turned the stone and looked beneath it... "peace on earth" was all it said." -- One Tin Soldier