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Hi, I'm new in here. My english not very well so I made mistake sometimes when I write.(excuse) Anyway, These are my last works. I hope you like. (may it be easy)
Last edited by mert_yavasca; May 1st, 2005 at 12:43 PM.
photo collage is a great way to make images. your sky is washed out looking right now and does not feel like a sky up high...the wall is sitting better in space compared to the sky.
the action of the swooshing missile is there...but your glowing whiteness makes me wonder what it is..i guess what I am trying to say is that it seems like you are somewhat unsure of what you want with this...parts look like you want it to be painted and drawn looking..parts look like you want it to be abstract...parts look like you want it to be a matte painting....but these aspects of the design are not unified. If that is your choice..why did you make it? If it is not a choice then perhaps some unity of rendering would help.
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I think you did a bet much on the tail on the first one and the tower could use a bit more texture but I like the rest of it. The second dudes torso has too darker shadows. But he looks solid. Nice style.
It was my first photshop work.thanks for your replias. You are so good. And you are right Jason manley, while I was doing it I made a lot of mistake on the glowing whiteness. But I always believe in "mistakes teach you right" . (Can I explain?)It's good to think same thing. Thanks a lot.
Thanks Kharma. It has been two months that I have never been here. When I look back I see the Jason manley made my first crit in Conceptart forums. Now I can understand how ı'm lucky one. About gladiator, u r right about your comments, but u know it's my first photoshop work and I don't think anything about coloring. I used there a lot of dark and all the details destroyed. See u again.
Hey nice work, I like the fire balls but id add some light to the walls where theyre hitting, their fire and emitting ALOT of light good though very good like how youve made them