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    a mission gone wrong.

    ho, no.



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    The body seems really long. Besides that it is good.

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    well i think the design of his suit
    makes is upper body seem longer.
    and maybe i just draw him this way...
    anyway thank you for the comment.


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    when my eye is on the focus, out of the corner of my eye it looks like hes being anal penetrated!! cool pic

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    Actually, the long body comes from the foreshortening of the upper torso. We're seeing a part of the back and still all of the lower torso. That's a long body.

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    I like this a lot. Nice color scheme, and I like the contrast of the smoke of the fallen partner. This tells a nice story.
    I like the proportions. It goes along with you style very well.

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    dogfood - i guess you`re right.
    kube - cheers man.
    form - you`re an idiot.

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    haha! WHAT? its true!! did you have to line the laser beam up right with his ass?? Ok ok ill let that one slide...

    on a more helpful note

    -speculars are distracting in the pectoralis/shoulder areas, perhaps tone them down JUST slightly.

    - The specular lines on the river are at a distracting angle to the horizon line. Perhaps they would technically appear like this?? But you may want to use some artistic license here.

    - I really like the composition, and the colours, and i really enjoy the directional strokework in the smoke cloud where it meets the man. Details like that can sometimes make a piece.

    Hehe, not just a one track mind. I guess at first, the presumed anal situation just made me want to..... chuck, mate?

    (i think ive reached an ALL TIME LOW)

    Cheers

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