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March 2nd, 2005 #1
The elephant and the fox
sugestions and critics are good..
(excuse my bad english)
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Im just a newbie but maybe i can help. I like the first one coz the background looks and feels like the ocean but the 2 fishes doesnt seem to fit in the scene, it looks somehow pasted. You should try making the light in the water affect them. And maybe tweak the reflection at the surface of the water, it has too much colour on it (excuse my lack of knowledge of technical terms) I like the 2nd though! Me n my classmate was laughing loud seeing an elephant attracted to a lady fox. hahahahah. I like the expression on his face
March 5th, 2005 #3
2 fishes doesnt seem to fit in the scene -- yes. I agrre..some revision here.
the reflection at the surface of the water -- It´s fake but I want that way, maybe too exagerated..
thanks a lot for the observations.
March 5th, 2005 #4
the fish seem alright to me. the hands are really out of place and i would recommend taking them out. you would get a flirty feeling. the elephant is nice but i think it needs a little more contrast. other than that i love the characters and the environment on the bottom one rox.