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    Uiriamu : thanks for your feedback again ! l I will surely add something to that enviro

    NickyBeats : Hey Nick, I'm glad you like them , always confidence boost


    I updated the mecha piece. I don't know if it has enough or too much lights

    Lights were suggested by Samma


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    Hello zou!

    I love the "House in the Desert" image, it would be great to see it from another perspective but thats just me being greedy

    Regarding your most recent post of the "mech" I think the bright light on the right hand side is pulling too much focus. Adding multiple light sources is fine as long as they are used to guide the viewers eye and not distract form the primary focal point of the image. The lights should also affect their surroundings such as the lights on the arms of the mech which could cast circular patches of light on the floor.

    Also you should try adding a little more atmosperic perspective to push the background element further back as the middle/background are blending together too much. Also parts of the mech (the two thrusters above it's head) need to be emphasised and seperated from the background. Finally I think the mech could be a little larger (or the image cropped) and more dominant in the image as its the main focus and would help give it more power and presence.

    I hope these comments help. It's a very cool image that I think could look awesome if taken to the next level.

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    Mothman : Tanks for your extensive comment, I fixed some points. I thought I did enough atmospheric, but seems not. I pushed it more.
    A little sketch for fun
    And a wip: It's tough like a game environment (platform)
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    another sketch for fun

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    Nice sketch.

    I agree that the lights on the Mech piece are a bit distracting. There are too many lights in my opinion. I also think it would be better if you added a stronger light on the Mech piece to make it stand out from the background.

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    Hey Zou, great progress as always. Really like what you have done with this last portrait sketch. Limited colour palette works really well and I like the texture you have created in the background. The only little crit i have is there seems to be some symmetry difference between the eyes, but a great sketch for fun. You are rocking!

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    Istmin52 : Thanks for the feedback. Take note
    Marian Rowling : Hey Marian, really glad of your visits. Yes I agree about assymetry but wanted to do lesser strokes and corrections for this sketch.

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    Hey zou,

    I like how the mech image turned out after the changes.

    Also the latest portrait sketches and the environment are very cool. It could be used as a point and click adventure (one of my favourite genres) background

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    nice portraits zou!! that mech piece is coming along nicely too! I always struggle with that many things to deal with, hard surface environment and a mech... my head cant handle it haha, props for sticking to your guns!

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    Mothman : thanks for your visit I appreciate

    NickyBeats : Hey Nicky , coming from you, it's a big accomplishment for me

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    I was almost sure the last painted portrait of that girl was traditional oil paint haha, I really had to look three times before I understood it was digital. Great job!

    The mech looks aaawesome, I'm really impressed!

    Always nice to see you workin'! Keep it up Z!

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    Regarding the Mech piece: I was wondering on how that thing is going to walk.

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    Woo! I like the content you've been coming up with lately. Loving the sketch of the man with the gun, great pose. Keep it up, man.

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    Uiriamu : thanks big compliment for me. always a pleasure to read you

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    some ghibli studies i'm doing

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    Hey, I haven't commented here before so thought I'd drop by. Really liking your stuff man! beautiful ink studies one page back (some streetviews) and a lot of interesting ideas from imagination - that mech is looking great. Latest bunch of ghibli enviros are nice as well! definitely will be back for more


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    Hey zou! abandoned CA for a couple months. Great to see you are still going strong. I really like the mech piece. i think what could help is making a more focused focal point by leaving ur lightest lights in a single area. if u made the area behind the mech darker u could silhoutte it more and make the piece clearer. just an idea! cool paintings

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    that's really nice ghibli study. Ghibli always draw very detail background and vibrant color
    which movie is it overall looks so whimsical hehe
    i love your mecha #1321 it's finally finished, looks very detail, great value balance dark and white i think

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    DefiledVisions : Thanks for your visit and comment
    Saraiva : Thanks for your comment. I'll propably change those lights since many noticed it :p
    ricknos : glad you liked something here . Ghiblies are, Arrietty, Howl's moving caslte (I think)

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    I love these ghibli studies, great idea. I might try this myself

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    Oh these are from Ghibli movies! Right! Really cool, when you think about it ghibli movies are the bestest. Perfect study subject to be honest. Really cool zou, keep it up!

    Values and colors seems to be pretty spot on, well done. Keep it up

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    Hey man, keep pushing yourself! You are doing awesome man, keep it stylin'! =)

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    Mothman : good idea
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    self portrait (a bit exagerated :p )
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    3 values study (never did this one)
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    Cool self portrait! You look very very wise!

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    Uiriamu : I am ! though i don't have such a long barb


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    The studies and exercises you have been doing recently are definitely the work of a wise person

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    Mothman : thanks for your visit Let's hope it's true

    Dihya in a similar situation
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    heya zou! awesome updates recently! I love all of the studies! I agree with Mothman, very good choices of studies! great work zou! keep it going!

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    Nicky: thanks for the push up take care

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