Page 58 of 97 FirstFirst ... 8 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 ... LastLast
Results 856 to 870 of 1455
  1. #856
    Join Date
    Oct 2004
    Location
    Philippines
    Posts
    2,925
    Thanks
    410
    Thanked 273 Times in 205 Posts
    Nice comics! I enjoy the colorful, animated style.

    Some crits:

    1. The 1st panel with the castle could use more depth. You could separate the mountains in the bg further by desaturating the colors. Also have a look at this image:

    http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...ng-d3csbyo.jpg

    Notice how the outlines in the bg are not as dark as the ones in the foreground? Maybe you could try that out and see what happens.

    Another thing I've noticed is the scale between the character and the castle. The castle doesn't feel really large because the distance between them seems too close. And that makes it look like the character is big in comparison. I would probably use another shot to further emphasize the size of the castle too make it more dramatic.

    2. The last panel with the crowd could use depth as well. The clown/jester character near us is too distracting. He's taking us away from the focus which is the hero. Put him in shadow( just lower his value range). Remember that objects near us tend to have the darkest values. Try to make the hero standout in that panel.

    Anyway, these are the ones that I noticed right away for now.

    P.S. I like the Obiwan like character. Cool!


  2. Hide this ad by registering as a member
  3. The Following User Says Thank You to Dizon For This Useful Post:


  4. #857
    Join Date
    Nov 2009
    Location
    turkey/istanbul
    Posts
    415
    Thanks
    91
    Thanked 83 Times in 79 Posts
    ı like your character emotions. They are so action and great colorful

  5. The Following User Says Thank You to karantina For This Useful Post:

    zou

  6. #858
    Join Date
    Apr 2006
    Location
    Norway
    Posts
    867
    Thanks
    508
    Thanked 193 Times in 148 Posts
    Cool stuff! I really like your gesture studies and the character stuff, like the looter and the greek-looking girl with a trident.

    I think you might benefit from doing some more facial/head studies. Sometimes the expressions on your characters are a little confusing.
    Quote Originally Posted by Shakespeare
    I think he'll be to Rome
    As is the osprey to the fish, who takes it
    By sovereignty of nature.
    SSG
    Anthis Dizon Angel Intheuk Zou Crane Hai

  7. #859
    Join Date
    Mar 2010
    Location
    germany
    Posts
    575
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 171 Times in 156 Posts
    That Otter is hilarious. I love him. Do some more human/animal crossovers please.
    They're so funny.

    Keep you lines and strokes easy, loose and sketchy.

  8. #860
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    my mind
    Posts
    2,100
    Thanks
    555
    Thanked 1,050 Times in 907 Posts
    Dizon; big thanks for your long comment ( the client did his changes too)
    karantina: thanks for your visit and hope you 'll like more characters

    Hai: okay dude
    shockowaffel: really ? didn't thaught it was so funny anyway he can take many appearance so , i guess i will do more.

    some inking

  9. The Following User Says Thank You to zou For This Useful Post:


  10. #861
    Join Date
    Jul 2007
    Location
    Sheffield, UK
    Posts
    2,187
    Thanks
    4,148
    Thanked 2,209 Times in 884 Posts
    Your tree idea is really nice and your linework is coming on really nicely in the comic nice update keep it up!

  11. The Following User Says Thank You to Angel Intheuk For This Useful Post:

    zou

  12. #862
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    Nowhere but here
    Posts
    2,362
    Thanks
    2,844
    Thanked 1,155 Times in 1,077 Posts
    Dude, your comics are HOT! =) Obiwan has some serious style =) Lol =) Your last panels are really nice imho =)

  13. The Following User Says Thank You to Kungfoowiz For This Useful Post:

    zou

  14. #863
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    my mind
    Posts
    2,100
    Thanks
    555
    Thanked 1,050 Times in 907 Posts
    Angel Intheuk: thanksyou angel
    Kungfoowiz: thanks for your nice words, don't hesitate to shred it


    a little fast sketch of a panda-bear-weird animal

  15. #864
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    my mind
    Posts
    2,100
    Thanks
    555
    Thanked 1,050 Times in 907 Posts
    exercice: draw a tree/plant then do a creature out of it

    it isn't really weird/fantastic creature, i wanted something quite 'normal'

  16. The Following 3 Users Say Thank You to zou For This Useful Post:


  17. #865
    Join Date
    May 2012
    Posts
    166
    Thanks
    32
    Thanked 40 Times in 40 Posts
    really like your work, your traditional a bit more then digital at this point. but your digitals are getting along nicely!

    It is great to see how much you improved since the first pages as well.
    Please, excuse me for the possible errors in my English.

    Sketchbook

  18. The Following User Says Thank You to Steeliebob For This Useful Post:

    zou

  19. #866
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    my mind
    Posts
    2,100
    Thanks
    555
    Thanked 1,050 Times in 907 Posts
    Steeliebob: thanks for your feedback i'm surprised (and pleased) i'm more traditional more than digital. feel more old school like that (wich is false of course)


    ssg week study: absolutely not finished, but have to post

    include as many colors as you could

  20. The Following User Says Thank You to zou For This Useful Post:


  21. #867
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    Nowhere but here
    Posts
    2,362
    Thanks
    2,844
    Thanked 1,155 Times in 1,077 Posts
    Drawing's looking good man, last one are you going to include butterflies? Would be nice to see some animals/insects in your picture, they can be a nice complement =)

  22. The Following User Says Thank You to Kungfoowiz For This Useful Post:

    zou

  23. #868
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    my mind
    Posts
    2,100
    Thanks
    555
    Thanked 1,050 Times in 907 Posts
    Kungfoowiz : thanks for your feedback good suggestion for the colorful picture will take it (if i finish it )

    a panel for a short comic (READ FROM RIGHT TO LEFT)
    i think of leaving it like these (no more cleaning/inking)

  24. The Following User Says Thank You to zou For This Useful Post:


  25. #869
    Join Date
    Mar 2004
    Location
    my mind
    Posts
    2,100
    Thanks
    555
    Thanked 1,050 Times in 907 Posts
    more panels

    read from right to left

  26. The Following User Says Thank You to zou For This Useful Post:


  27. #870
    Join Date
    Jan 2010
    Location
    Amerstburg, Ontario
    Posts
    1,070
    Thanks
    7
    Thanked 429 Times in 415 Posts
    Gah! Such cool work...total badassery. ^_^

  28. The Following User Says Thank You to Psychobuddy For This Useful Post:

    zou

Page 58 of 97 FirstFirst ... 8 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 ... LastLast

Similar Threads

  1. SketchBook: A's sketchbook and scribbles
    By Revolver9 in forum Sketchbooks
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: November 10th, 2013, 04:15 PM
  2. SketchBook: Rowan's Sketchbook Scribbles
    By rowan89 in forum Sketchbooks
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: November 14th, 2010, 10:55 PM
  3. SketchBook: Kat's New Sketchbook [college scribbles]
    By Katfayheirti in forum Sketchbooks
    Replies: 105
    Last Post: April 25th, 2010, 04:16 AM
  4. SketchBook: **the~sofa~sketchbook** everything from scribbles to art!
    By life on the sofa in forum Sketchbooks
    Replies: 79
    Last Post: August 18th, 2007, 09:04 PM
  5. SketchBook: Kiril's Sketchbook Scribbles
    By Kiril in forum Sketchbooks
    Replies: 13
    Last Post: July 21st, 2005, 02:06 PM

Members who have read this thread: 21

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

Developed Actively by the makers of the Best Amazon Podcast