Bro, you'r kicking ass! =) Would just maybe say smooth your lines between head and neck form, smooth them up just a bit, and then it would flow better imho. =) Really try to pull your eyes back into the skull, I'm trying to work on pulling two lines back into the face, or like for your own methods just keep trying to pull those balls back into their sockets.. lullies =) Here's sketch to show you maybe an idea, hope it helps =) You're doing awesome! Go go! =) Be happi! =)
Hey bro! =) Lull.. told you I'm crap! =) Mmm.. for your characters.. first one reminds me of Chrono Crusade but it's qwl =) Last guy with the minigun and sword is my fav, cuz his boots and like clothing is quite unique, also like the shape of his minigun is quite catching imho =) Have fun! =)
Hi Zou - great face sketches, impressed that they are from memory, you've got alot of detail in them. You tend to stylize the faces a bit, I do this too without meaning it somestimes. As a result their noses seem too short and it makes the heads look a bit squashed. If it's intentional like in a caricature then you would need to exaggerate the rest of the face accordingly to compensate and make them look a bit more balanced. Hope that makes sense
Great little characters too on your last post, I love the last guy with the boots and minigun too, he seems so excited and his hat is cute
kikindaface: merci merci. je vais voir aussi ton sb de temps en temps §Hy9oD: thanks shypod Kungfoowiz: thanks for the feedback Angel Intheuk: you mean the distance between eyebrows and bottom of nose is short ? ok i take notes. For the caricature compensating, you mean when i do something short i should do another thing longer ? (chin for examples)
thanks for comment
here some pose from mind. trying to apply the new learned figure structure of faragasso
Whoa.. nice work bro, looks like you're working from mind mostly, well done for you! =) Loving it too! =) The girl is my fav cuz the forms are pretty nice imho, legs maybe a little long but I'm qwl with that, it's a nice piece =)
Nice sketchbook, very inspirational stuff. I especially like that oil painting on page 10, an awesome result for a third try at oil painting.
The shading in the digital paintings on page 15 also caught my eye, very nice.
And in general I really like the dynamic poses in your pencil sketches, I think they are very convincing...
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Hey Zou wassup, the face experimentation is looking really great. Your lines are confident!
maybe the perspective seems a bit off when you draw buildings from life, but nothing very important. Also love when you use watercolors to support your linedrawings! it gives a nice effect!