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February 18th, 2005 #1
CHOIR OF MIME scene1
This is my first post on concept and this pic is my first peice i like to get feedback on.
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I'd like to see the figure be a bit more developed, but it is pretty far away. If you could post a larger pic it would be easier to crit. It's hard to tell what is happening with the beam. Is it emmiting from that structure or is the structure being hit by it? If it's being hit some debris flying through the air would help...
Overall though it has a nice feel to it.
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February 18th, 2005 #3
I'd do something like this:
February 18th, 2005 #4
if anyone here played half life 2 maybe theyd agree with me - this looks like the level where its flooded and u have to ride the little aero bike
February 18th, 2005 #5
Tekno's version does add more contrast and define the visuel space better. The lights and colours add more drama to the piece which was a bit mono chrome. In saying that the first version gives a good idea of the values before
going into colour detail.
February 18th, 2005 #6
I love the reflection of that beam thing in the water. Very nice. I think the figure's legs are a little questionable though - the way her (his?) weight sits, it looks like she'd fall off the pointy thing backwards. I think all you need is a little of the lower legs showing to give some idea of whether he/she is standing or crouching. Love those hanging cords too.
February 18th, 2005 #7
i think the red lights are competeing (spelling?) with the blue lightning.
February 18th, 2005 #8
Looks great Steph! glad you put something up, you have more in this series you should post when you have time ..(I also agree with the illuminated water comment!..I didnt notce it till I read the comment..slick!
February 21st, 2005 #9
really cool piece,the coloured version looks great but just from a visual taste I prefer the monochrome look,it has a bleak feel that I just has a better mood
February 21st, 2005 #10
thaks for all the great input. i like the over paint , but it looses a bit of the mood i was trying to establish. very cool though. i especially like the foreground object that were put in.
my next peice will be a little closer to real color theory...