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    Watch me 3d!!!

    Here's render of a pocket watch I modelled in Maya. Lighting is just standard 3 point lighting. I want the over all composition to look like a Baroque classical painting.


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    It's nice but only critic is;

    We can see the jagged texture in the old papers, kind of JPEG compression, and t can't be from your imagem because the watches are fine.
    THe table also needs a bit more texture.
    And maybe use a bump map for the old papers so that the ink gets some realism with the lightning.

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    Also just noticed, the piece of the watch that gets linked to the chain should be loose and touching the floor, and not so straight and rigid like they are.

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    Those are some excellent crits Castor, I'll work on refining them.

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    this i better suited in the 3d section

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    My only comment would be the reflection on top of the watches. It looks very blank; you should add a ceiling there, maybe a lamp or moulding around the ceiling/wall joint. Something to breakup the solid grey reflection on top of the watches. Otherwise, GREAT JOB!! very good work!

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