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    The end of the morning ritual

    Long time lurker, first time poster.

    I had big problems with the back side of his head. Most of this is from my head but I used a mirror for the face and Talmir's sholders for the cape.

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    Hi!

    I like the idé but I think you should losen upp your style. you look very tense with the graphite. And I think you lose yourself in detail around the face. The drawing looks kinda flat. The belt is just neglected and unfinished. maybe if you ad som dark and work with the body some more. Put som effort in light and shadow it ads drama and dept!
    Ceep up the good work!
    I look forward for more drawings.

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    Off to a good start, that face is well done so far.

    Proportions could use work, his head is very large compared to his body, I barely see a ribcage in there at all.

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