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    Exclamation Mixed technique(need improvement)help!!!

    This is a new pic I did today.it took me three hours in total.,and I hope u like it cose I do.

    And one more thing: if u can please cose i need more IMPROOVING.




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    Okay, this picture looks hard to crtique but I will try my best. As a piece of art, this picture doesn't seem to express any kind of idea or emotion. It just looks like abstraction for the sake of abstraction. I have nothing against abstract art, but I would suggest getting better at realism first, and try to come up with and something that communicates an idea instead of just random juxtaposed objects. I hope I was helpful and feel free to tell me if I'm being too harsh

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    hi

    Dan1989 it's rigth, this work it's hard to critique.
    The only thing that i can tell you is that maybe you can work much more the shadows but the idea is good.

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    Thanks guys!!!but i whould need some critiques about the texture.i know that the picture is too small to see the texture but u can see it from this ...altiude or something...

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    it's really good, fence. i'm not that experimented, but my guess is that you should work more on the placement of the colours. the upper side is actually really good (colours, i mean). like the hands and the cup, though. quite an improvement from the others i saw. peace man

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    Thanks u horny space monkey !!!

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