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Open to all critique... advanced crit is encouraged. I realize I need to work on the lips, though. Thanks!
Looks good so far! Your eyes are even, which is good. The one on the left might benefit from a little more emphasis on the lower eyelid, but that might just be me.
As for the mouth: it looks great, it's just a little too low.
I look forward to seeing this when it's finished.
looks great but i agree with slash... 8) ?
edit: then i looked at the top of her head and saw sunglasses. so... erm... nice weather today.
ambition makes you look pretty ugly
Hehe, thanks for the comments and critiques everyone! I'll be sure to keep you guys updated. Oh, and about the sunglasses... scroll up (they're on her head). I will budge the lips up a bit. Thanks again!
You lied... Where are the sun glasses ? .. ohhhhh.. now I see, in the hair...
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The skin tones are great and the render is nice and clean - the only thing that stands out as problematic right now is the eye line, they do not form a straight line and appear very crooked.
The lips are fine where they are, not everyone has to conform to ideal proportions and placements - the placement of the lips are totally tangible.