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    girl with sunglasses

    girl with sunglasses

    Open to all critique... advanced crit is encouraged. I realize I need to work on the lips, though. Thanks!
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    Looks good so far! Your eyes are even, which is good. The one on the left might benefit from a little more emphasis on the lower eyelid, but that might just be me.

    As for the mouth: it looks great, it's just a little too low.

    I look forward to seeing this when it's finished.

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    Off to a great start, really nice color job.

    Yeah, lips are a little off, like Adam said a little low, and they don't seem to get quite a deep enough shadow on the lower one, which flatens them out a little.

    Can't wait to see the rest.
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    looks great but i agree with slash... 8) ?


    edit: then i looked at the top of her head and saw sunglasses. so... erm... nice weather today.
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    Hehe, thanks for the comments and critiques everyone! I'll be sure to keep you guys updated. Oh, and about the sunglasses... scroll up (they're on her head). I will budge the lips up a bit. Thanks again!
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    You lied... Where are the sun glasses ? .. ohhhhh.. now I see, in the hair...
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    The skin tones are great and the render is nice and clean - the only thing that stands out as problematic right now is the eye line, they do not form a straight line and appear very crooked.

    The lips are fine where they are, not everyone has to conform to ideal proportions and placements - the placement of the lips are totally tangible.
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