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    Interstellar Aria - Final Update at Bottom

    Hey all, heres a wip in an all too familiar genre. Fire away!





    Cheers,
    jm

    Last edited by J May; March 6th, 2005 at 12:14 PM.
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    I like this alot. I can see alot of potential in it. Maybe some bad guys could be approaching from the edges of the frame. This would give an intersting border. But I can see this is going to be special. Nice one

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    Thanks Kian3001, thats a good suggestion I'll take you up on.

    Here is another update.



    Cheers!
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    This is looking really good, but the first color scheme is better, because now the girl is disappearing in the midground.

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    hey man, cool stuff, interesting piece, plus love the perspective on this!

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    Update, trying out the flipped image. I've also detailed some areas, trying to find that balance between having lots of little detail and merely suggesting it through a few shapes and shadows.



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    i think the work is coming out nice. the last pic when u flipped it. just work on the lighting cuz i dont think the rock they arestandin on shud b so dark.

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    cool beans to you...my friend.
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    sKeTcHbOoK update page3 (scroll to the bottom of page)
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    Yeah, the last pic is sweet, i would keep it flipped like that, looks better.

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    Thanks guys. Good comment on the ground dadamafia, I'll see what I can do to make it fit more with the light the characters are standing in.

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    Final image, posted here for feedback before it hits the 'Finally Finished' forum.

    Thanks for all the good crits along the way.



    Cheers,
    jm

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    That green glow is incredibly disconcerting. It is a much better composition without it.

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    I agree. What is it?

    Peace, Love and Harmony... I could never get them all into bed at the same time!
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    i think the green glow should have a greater effect on the background. make it shine more on some rocks.

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    sKeTcHbOoK update page3 (scroll to the bottom of page)
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    Thanks for taking the time guys, I appreciate it.

    Cheers,
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