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    how i'm gonna go (wip)

    hi all. i could use some crits on this one:

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    The compostion on this is very disorienting. There is no real path for the eye; it just jumps around. Try to work the elements and values in defing the path and focal point. It will lead to a much more interesting piece.
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    Other then the fact that i have no Fudgeing idea whats going on i like it! Very Cerebrel
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    Wink

    I love the pallete. Listen to dogfood on that whole composition thing... & maybe clean up the girls shoulder, took me a second to recognize what's going on there.. Nice though, we likes it very much; especially how the tentical-faced-guy's robes run into the thing the girl is laying on.
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