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    FanArt WiP...C&C needed

    This is my first attempt at painter. Im useing painter9. Tell me what you think.
    Oh its more WoW based fan art.

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    Dont know WoW so I may have missed crucial clues.

    Is the picture about a witch holding 2 fireballs? If not, I cannot see her hands.

    The fireball behind could be smaller for emphasized perspective.

    The folds in the gown and cape can use more work.

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    Two things:

    First of all I just think you have a bit of a streakiness going in the shades and hilights. Maybe try to eliminate some of that.

    As well, the way you have the "camera angled" and the way the character stands makes his upper body look a bit curled up, up top. We can't really tell how far his hand reaches so the pose feels static due to the angle you chose. It doesn't look like you are unconfortable with drawing a bit of perspective so why not turn the guy around a bit and let him expand in 3 dimensional space.

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