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    Carnifex' ended sketchbook, 18th oct. 05

    dunno if i will be able to draw daily always...work is exhausting...but anyways, you gotta set a starting point somewhere! so i'll try to update as often as possible. hope the pics aren't too big.

    gave up after some time on this one(yesterday).
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    stupid warmup sketch from today that i dislike very much.
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    block figures 1
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    block figures 2
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    and a finished doodle i very much enjoyed creating(thread also in sketches section)
    martian from "war of the worlds"
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    yeh well....tell me what you think so far and what i should practice most in the next time. my top priority right now is to get my pictures to look more natural, because yet they mostly look too much like comic-book art.
    so...LET ME HEAR YOUR CRITS!
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    These are very good! The only thing I noticed was that the girl in the first image, her arms seem to be at the wrong angle... as if her far away arm should be lower. All in all, a great start!
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    thanx.
    the girl's arms were the factor that made me give up-plus the already adressed comic-book look of the muscles and stuff.
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    quick crits

    Not to be a party pooper, but I think this might help: Your proportions aren't bad, but the positions look aquard and the figures look outlined. Try drawing into your figures more... jesture drawings from life may properly loosen you up. Also, try and pay more attention to your figure-ground relation. The fairy critter is lookin a little manly, try getting some girls to model for you, that'd probably be benefitial as well. Keep going, your on the right track!

    btw, that love that last creature you posted, looks squishie.
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    which picture are you most relating too with the proportions?
    atm i can't attend any life drawing classes and have very limited access to cafés and stuff because of work.
    thanx for the comment
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    I think if you rotate the fairy girl image a little to the right, it would look better and most likely let you draw the arms more accurately, because at the angle it's at now, it looks like she would fall right off.

    Keep at it man, I'm going through the same thing. Too much work, not enough art, haha.
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    Hiya Carnifex - short leg syndrome... I suffer from it myself. As for drawing people: I'm in the same boat too, try TV!

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    thanx.
    will see what i can do.
    you gonna have to wait for more pics till i can get home and scan them(i'm at work right now).
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    today wasn't a very good day for drawing-i'm being pretty tired all the time...well, i did atleast do something. just some gesture drawings mostly and a short attempt at dividing the hand into parts like mentler(pretty inspiring guy).

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    agh-i'd need some site with focus on feet and their anatomy...every anatomy book out there doesn't seem to focus too much on them.
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    sorry for the big delay...had some days of hard work...

    a secretary sketch i don't like very much.(i hate shoes)
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    some stick figure tests from today.
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    then i decided i need a break from human/-like anatomy so i made some sketches inspired by sammy and brasshorsekiller.
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    probably one more to come later today.

    edit:
    here's verily one more...for lord of laquinta. about 1 hour i think (still slooow).
    topic was pinup girl.
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    sorry that i don't sketch as much as others per day.stupid work.
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    i forgot the name of the guy who does these awesome birds,bunnies and children who look all that creepy. kinda like that blob in the right hand corner best. a4, hb pencil.
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    sorry for not updating for such a long time...hadn't time to scan over the holidays/draw much.
    well, anyways, here's again a bunch.

    testing my new ink pens(xmas present).ignore the manga thingy
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    most probably the most pathetic page in this sketchbook thread.
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    more trouble with feet...
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    finally something good (although one hand is too big and the other looks weird).sketched today.
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    ok, so my biggest problem are feet.could anyone post links how to construct them properly/references? i can't find anything proper.

    oh yeah, and GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK PPL!
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