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    Whoa! Huge updates...

    Really good work on your figure drawings from Jan 22, those looks great. It's very good that you're drawing the little figures and poses, those help a lot! I liked your recent studies and exercises, they seem to be helping you!

    Got progress and improvement here, post some more!

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    Morbid & Ian, thank you ! Ian, you're right ... I think I'm getting out of my slump, and getting some more productive stuff done again ... let's see

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    femur, tibia, fibula:
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    patella, and some scribbles:
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    Hey hey, wooohoo. Long time no me.

    Cool studis dude. The pelvis, torso , and the other bones (femur, tibia, fibula, patella, scribbles) Are my favs. Awsome stuff. Try to rotate your bones in 3d orbit, then add the muscles and skin. Also watch for your prespective. So important, it'll hit u baddly if u dont learn it.


    Keep it up dude, ur killing me with ur updates,,, Argh, ,,, check out my new update (butts), and see whos better, Jokes.

    Got to do some more studies,, when? i dunno, whever i get some time.

    Post more. use your time wisely, have fun with it.

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    Heroic, thanks, I know you're busy lately, so thanks for taking the time !!
    I tried to be aware of the bones in the model, today ... but it's a bit hard cause I don't know all about them yet, and muscles even less ...
    I'll work some on photo's too soon (paint in the bones or so) ... that way I get some more confidence when I have modelclass again !

    I'm happy you're liking the bones ... cause I'll do some more studies before I get to more fancy stuff .

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    yaaheee awesome O_O really digg ur studies

    dissection cool thing can i have that liver pls ? ohh yea.. got some silicon teats too ? i take em !

    ur gestures getting better nice dynamic

    ma favorite : http://users.pandora.be/Decryptor/im...005_02_11b.jpg

    that girl down right.. nice dynamic pose.. just awesome X_x


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    heya Bob, more surgery ? Can do ! Thanks for your continuous support !

    But today, just some more scribbles ... no ref
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    Hey, man, now your doin' it! These last figure drawings are awsome! I think it's also good to, you know, practise lines and figures without rendering and stuff. And I'm telling you, those figure drawings are solid. But yes faces and rendering are also importent, but you got the time, np.

    Keep it going!
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    Tigermilk, thanks so much ! And I will get to rendering & faces soon, I promise !
    In fact I already sorta did in today's lifedrawing class ...only butchered the proportions a bit, sigh ... I blame the light (spot) shining in my eyes ... hm or maybe myself for not choosing another seat once I figured that ... but I had some fun looking for shadows & all !

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    first some more gestures from the mind ..
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    life ... hate the head (proportions), but some people in class seemed to like it, so here goes
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    life, I like this one best, although I didn't really measure a lot, so it's off on some places ... also didn't have enough time to render more (like arms & legs/feet). About 30 minutes I think.
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    Your figures are feelling much more grounded,
    you are starting to get a much better eye for
    proporcions, NICE work, I like the way you grounded
    the feet of this last one, in relation to the first image
    you posted of the girl with the spear, in this one I can
    see your are paying more attencion to prespective
    and anatomy; way to GO!!,
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    Hi NightVision!

    You have a good sketchbook thread going on here. It looks like you are doing a variety of good exercises from life drawings to memory drawings to anatomy studies. I think that there is a lot of improvement to be seen, as maxetormer was pointing out. One issue that i do see, which others have touched on, is the way you deal with the heads of the figures. You seem to tend to make the head maybe 10-30% smaller than it should be (as in many of the figures from page 37). Also, make sure to pay attention to the way the shoulders->neck->head attatchment works, so that the heads are properly place in relation to the body.

    Like I said, you seem to really be coming along, thanks to your work. Keep it up!

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    Hey Nightvision!

    You left some comments on my sketckbook and therefore, I thought it was good to check yours. You've got some good stuff over here.

    I think that my advice to you goes along the line of what leslief says. It's the heads you need to work on. It looks to me like you do the whole figure first and then complete it with a head.

    Whenever you leave the head for last your drawings are in great danger of innacuracy. The head is the basis for proportions of the body! So my advice is that you start with the head, and then, using it as a unit of measure, comtinue with the figure as a whole.

    Alternatively, some guy named DaVinci liked to focus on certain parts of the body, not drawing the head or limbs. Maybe that's another approach?

    Well, thats my two cents for you. Keep up the good work!
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    Keep up the good work, the last figure rendering looks very good. Your gestures could use some work; try to know the shapes of the body but capture the movement. Instead of drawing in a cylinder as the torso, say, you would just draw a line where the back is. I wish I could find some, I believe Dan Milligan (His Sketchbook) has a very nice grasp of capturing the form in very simple strokes. You might learn something from looking through his sketchbook

    And also, I've noticed the lag in posting....Try to keep it up!
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    maxetormer, thank you ! Knowing perspective does wonders ! Can you believe, when I used to draw from life model ... I'd never draw the feet planted right, even though I could SEE how much higher the one behind was ... my brain (smart as it is *sarcastic*) always went 'Silly ! everybody knows them's close together !' I guess I overcompensated in that spear-lady one...

    leslief, thanks for the C&C ! You're right ... I didn't measure for those ... and my heads ARE too small, thanks for helping me notice !
    The shoulder neck area ... pain in my ass ... as you can see in today's update

    Wes, yep ... putting heads in last ...good observation ! I used to start with the head ... didn't like ... then thorax ... which I liked better ... then switched to pelvis-legs ... I 'm liking that one ... but now I do have trouble getting the head placed right (before as well actually ... the head never seemed to fit the pose once I was done, so I had to redraw ...
    Thanks for letting me know about Da Vinci ... drawing head & arms last is starting to make sense to me & feels better ... but I still have to make it work, lol.

    mos, I think I know what you're saying ... actionline & stuff, right ? but I'm not sure how to do that when drawing from my mind (from model that'd be hard enough ... too bad we almost never have short poses, so I can't practice) ... maybe if I practice from ref first ... ? Good point ... one more thing on the list as what to practice .

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    faces from ref, while being very sleepy ... bad idea ! and then some crappy doodles
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    girl no ref ... started with the head ... lots of trouble with neck/shoulders ... head construction ... shoes
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    more head (skull) construction ... sleepy doodles ... curves (to represent 3D) hard, very hard for me ...
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    figuring out some perspective construction
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