my stuff

[phoe][iX]

hi all ~` iam a new man here and i want to learnd more from you !~
give me some suggestions ~ thanks!!

[transient23]

gah!!! .... *shakes... quivers* GAH!!!! GOOOD!!!! ...

*bowsdown*

[phoe][iX]

and some stuff for game conceptIMG]http://www.chinadv.com/forum/Web/UpFiles/2004/8/20/21717150.jpg[/IMG]
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http://www.chinadv.com/forum/Web/UpF...4/44370401.jpg

[phoe][iX]

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[phoe][iX]

looking for critique~~

[Aly Fell]

No crits from me really, but I think your work is extremely well done. Wonderful attention to colour and detail. If I was to say anything, perhaps take a bit more time on your figurative work, and use a little more expression in the characters faces, but this is a minor point. Good work!

[Mat_Ratcliffe]

you have some very strong work here. Excellent use of colour, mark making and composition. The only crit I can think of right now is tone. In some of the finished pieces in your first post the image can be a bit confusing. Its hard to make out exactly whats going on. I think if a better organisation of tones was used you'd be able to read the images much better. Apart from that great stuff, thanks for sharing!

[mogando25]

Dude that is some seriously strong material. Very cool concept material. My crit. would be to experiment with depth of field. Many of your pieces have repeated compositions. I really like the textures that you capture in your paints.

[Riddick]

Nice work!
There is really good ideas!!!

[phoe][iX]

thx all for reply !

[Riddick]

Oh!
Nice work! Certainly one of the best on this topic!
Thank you it is a faery picture!

[Darksharp]

Gah! These are brilliant! 5 stars from me.

[phoe][iX]

[slickcoder]

Critques...

Composition: none

Color: none

Lighting: only one, on the first piece the monk's torso is lit as if by a spot light from above, yet all of his legs are in shadow, as well as the water underneath, him... the legs strike me the strangest. Everything else looks solid.

Other: Again, with the first peice, (i'm assuming it's meant to tell a story, and is therefore an illustration, if not, please disregard) if both the creature and the monk are coming out of the water: Why does the monk look so relaxed? Why aren't they dripping wet? Why is the splash so small? that's a freaking HUGE monster! *edit: maybe they are landing in the water?*

All of your other pieces are very very strong, and the first piece is good, it just had things that bothered me a little about it. Maybe it was the Shaolin Monk's Spade, anything kung fu related usually garners more scrutiny from me. So I guess I'm biased.

You're very talented.

[draigun]

good stuff, so how long did each character take you from start to finish??