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    Jedi

    Hey Everyone,

    Something inspired by SW and created using most of the methods described in Dougbots tutorial . Thanks 'Bot!

    Jedi

    Thanks also to Blackarts and the MCS artcrew for their crits.

    Cheers,
    jm
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    Better and Better. I can really feel that he's using the 'force'... gonna finish it anymore?...
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    I'm digging the figure. Love the perspective with the figure and the motion conveyed! I'd look into possibly adjusting the background graphic. See where the back of the sword handle intersects with the top fo the yellow panle? It just makes for an odd tangent. It also clashes with the sash (?) coming off of the sword too.

    If you're going to use shapes like that, be careful of how and or why you use it.
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    I think this is pretty good!
    You have such a graphic element in the background, it might be nice if you were to clean up the linework a little bit.
    I'm looking specifically at the legs, etc.

    keep it up!
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