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    arthur in the fuuuuuture

    a loose painting i did for my homework. supposed to be a tight or detailed one but i did not have enough time, so...
    even though it isn't a good one, i hope u enjoy it.

    oh...it's too small..
    and too dark..

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    I like the angle and complexity of this, but the figure seems to be an afterthought (with clothing and pose that are rather used and staid). I'm not sure that the orange-ish tints work with the overwhelming profusion of blue lights.

    If we were closer to the subject (perhaps only seeing his shoulders and head), we would most likely be drawn into the scene more. His total lack of emotion really doesn't compel us to figure out what's going on.

    Very cool environment, though.

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    oh, I see something that i didnt see before..
    thank you so much, dogfood. your comments have been a great help.
    now i see what could be fixed to be a better piece such as orangish tint..I guess it doesnt make sense..
    i agree with your crits.
    thank you, dogfood.

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    Anything for a fellow Orange Countian (Anaheim native, but not there now).

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    haha, go go Angels!!!

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    not bad

    pretty nice, but the image is too darkk. i can't tell what's going on? is that a female or guy? and what are they doing just standing there? it' not bad though just needs more clarity!


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