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    Feedback please.

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    Hello everybody! Please critique my character design sketch. I will make finish work later. Can you give me some advices of making good
    environment for characters.


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    She has the widest stance with those legs. Look at reference with horses with one leg up.

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    Where is light coming from set up still life (use one light) and study how light interacts with form https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-dqGkHWC5IU
    Are you using references? If not you could get bone, muscle, surface and other things that is related to your idea+ studying anatomy (bones and muscles) won't hurt Fix perspective, use simple boxes

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    I agree with the comments above but I would add to really learn about form and perspective. I would also make the pose more dynamic and add an expression on the face other than a blank scare.

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