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    My 2nd attempt at painting....would LOVE some direction!!!!

    Would love any advice, I'm beginner painter, no experience or classes but welcome all brutally honest critique please, I wanna learn!!!
    Thanks in advance

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    its really flat and uninteresting to look at.

    everything is clearly defined and seperated, with its own pattern, color and outline. the tilted horizon doesnt help much either.

    look into image-making and keep going .
    "Have only 4 values, but all the edges you want."
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    For a beginner using physical paints, this is pretty good. I went out and painted a stump yesterday and sunburned half my face. The resulting painting was far more horrendous than this piece, but I had a good time and learned some things. Just keep practicing, and building your focus. Focus and practice will get you farther than any critique I could give.
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