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    what do you think of this?

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    It's ok, but lacks coherent depth and scale.

    Not a fan of the washed out look, and things could be made a little better through variable line width.
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    Aah I see...Thank you so much ^^

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    I think trimming some of the left would improve the composition. It has charm overall, but I would have the guy on the left looking at the furry on the right rather than just off the page somewhere.

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    The trees on the right are shorter than the human figure. You can fix this by extending them above the horizon line. Also double check your path that the human is supposed to be standing on. He's standing in water at the moment. Perspective is a worthwhile thing to have under your belt.
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    Thank you all. I completely agree with your feedback, so I'll fix it.

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