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    Good Morning *warning nudity*

    Good Morning *warning nudity*

    Just knocked this one up quickly as a practise piece for my new wacom. Ended up using the mouse again mostly ..I'm so weak willed.... :cry:

    see the uncensored version here

    http://sean.sevspace.com/photoshop/goodmorning2.jpg

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    Hey, how do you know how my girlfriend looks ?????

    Looks pretty good, like the colours, what wacom do you use?

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    You ah.... "Knocked this one up..." Interesting choice of words. D

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    The coloring looks nice...but the linework quality is annoying...the outlines really lower the quality of your work...they are too thick and not anti-aliased which hurts in the eyes...

    Great coloring + bad lines = mediocre

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    Quote Originally Posted by Fozzybar
    The coloring looks nice...but the linework quality is annoying...the outlines really lower the quality of your work...they are too thick and not anti-aliased which hurts in the eyes...

    Great coloring + bad lines = mediocre
    I kind of disagree respectfully. This illustration is intended in the comic book style, and lines do tend to be hard-edged if they are inked...the boldness is just a preference/style, and to each his own. He also did mention that he knocked this out pretty quickly, and that he used a mouse for most of it.

    All a matter of taste is all.

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    I agree with Fozzybear that the outlines are too thick especially on her face -it makes the whole piece look very "heavy". But what really hurts MY eyes is the top of her head - the hair don't look too good - i know it's supposed to be comic style and stuff but they're completly messed up and you can only tell that this is hair because they're on her head - you should work some more on them. Apart from that - they're in the wrong place. Looks kinda like her skull is chopped off a bit

    The other hairdo on the other hand looks terrific Whole pice is quite nice

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    I agree, too outlined--I noticed something else too; on the uncensored version the pubic hair extends above the bikini tan-line (not good for the beach).

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    Just knocked this one up quickly
    haha



    Anyways, I like the gesture here, but she's so cartoony it seems like she would look better with a more severe, clean color job. Looks pretty good though.

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    hm, the coloring between her nose and eyebrows bugs me. i think it should be more smoothe. and the her "kitty" is weird looking, but acceptable. otherwise, i like it.

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    I really like the airbrushed look of her tan. Specially the tan lines. Nice touch!

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