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    Kristen Stewart, pencil on paper. Honest feedback wanted

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    Really, really good, only critique I may have is maybe that proportions are a bit off, her lower body seems too small for her upper body, but I really like the pencil work

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    The head is way too big.
    As for the rest, I'm highly suspicious.
    - What's that in her neck area? Did you... like, add a smear-effect on top of it...?
    - Why would you smear and fold the paper?
    - Why is there what looks like an editing error in the region around her left hand/ left upper leg (=our right)?
    - Why can I see something resembling pencil strokes only around the borders, when everything else is too clustered w low quality jpeg noise to recognize any lines?

    Sorry but right now I'm honestly not sure if I look at a fake that tries to imitate a pencil, or an actual drawing, that was handed to a child for a week before eventually getting it back to photograph and edit it with a potatoe...

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