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    Hello This is my last artwork...what do you think? constructive criticism would help me so much...


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    I like it a lot! Some details need work, though. The door on the left has an unexpected asymmetry, and the statue on the right doesn't seem to have enough space. One of the candelabras is washed away by an outside light source, so its position is illogical.

    Overall, the atmosphere looks a little cold, and the purpose of this space is unclear to me. It is too small for a hallway, too empty for a living. I suggest you work out its storytelling and rework its design...
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    I like that I can immediately know what every material each surface is supposed to be.
    Given the intensity of that far lit doorway, its reflection on the floor, and its placement so close to that column and being almost center in the composition; I'm seeing this optical illusion. At first I thought it was a magical door floating in the room.

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    Love it, sometimes the highlights and shadows look too strong, especially on the top of the arches in shadow, left door, and statue. Great drawing and texture though! How long did it take you to do this?
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    I would like to thank everyone for the suggestions : ) They helped me a lot to improve my artwork...I attached here the corrected image...If you need any suggestion from me I will be available
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