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    Critique please.

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    A good start, but there are issues.


    Lighting.. having a consistent lighting direction helps.


    Pure black doesn't help you when you need to add shadows and such. (feet, pants, bracers). Try something a bit lighter.


    Given the waist to feet length are the socks a few inches below knee height?


    the background needs help. If you can turn on variable brush size so it's not flat streaks of color. Dig in for a bit of detail.
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    Thank you!

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