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    Looking for critique of 2d concept // Thanks

    Concept is: Lavish church-like location

    Anything goes! Critique of concept, composition, lighting/values, colors/textures, rendering, brushwork?


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    Hmm.. no.. not a fan with the placement of those columns. The floor would indicate a reasonable bench fits in a square.. but then the next square back shows the columns super duper far back. Also I am not certain if they are parallel on each side of the screen.

    Just trying to fill in a rough estimation of lines isn't working out.


    The carpet doesn't seem to be obeying usual perspective laws, and the red looks to float above the green.
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    The first thing I noticed about the drawing actually was that the colors are not very well balanced? As in, the amount and strength of the blue is the same as the red is the same as the yellow. It kind of pulls my eye all over the place and doesn't really know where to settle. I suppose you should probably focus of limiting the highly saturated colors of your choice, and prioratizing certain colors over others. Other than that, wonderful work! I love the general design. Good luck!

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